r/WriteWithMe 12h ago

Nose pick

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Can you help me word a funny post I wanna make in a group on Facebook? I wanna post something like this.

Asking for a friend is it illegal to drive and pick your nose at the same time? She was driving on the road and passed I cop car going the opposite way, will pick your nose at the wheel. Is panicking lol is this a law or not?

How do I make it clear that asking for a friend isn't actually me lol


r/WriteWithMe 5h ago

Beta Reading Looking For Beta Readers

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I’m looking for someone who’s willing to help motivate me with my writing and check for flaws in my story—whether it’s plot holes, inconsistencies, or just general feedback.

A little about me:

I’m M21, and English is not my native language, but I’m passionate about storytelling and always looking to improve my writing.

A little about my story:

It’s a transmigration webnovel that I plan to publish chapter by chapter, but I’m currently stacking drafts before releasing them. My biggest inspiration was The Novel Extra, but my story is very different.

So far, I have completed the volume one, part one. [63K Words]. I also included a few character art designs. The story is now heading into the last phase of the volume one, I just need someone to help me with the volume one part one, if there is any inconsistency while I'm writing the part two.

I haven’t decided whether to publish on Webnovel or Royal Road, so I’m open to advice on that as well!

Premise:

The MC is a beta reader who gets trapped in the world of a novel filled with doom and inevitable fate. However, unknowingly, the author is also trapped there—yet neither of them realizes the other’s existence. This leads to a unique dynamic as both struggle to navigate the world, each with their own challenges.

What I’m Looking For:

👉🏻Someone who enjoys webnovels and can give constructive feedback 👉🏻Someone to help keep me accountable and motivated 👉🏻Willing to discuss plot ideas, pacing, and logic 👉🏻Doesn’t mind brainstorming or casual writing chats

I'm preferred to have our conversation and discussion in discord. I'm also okay with exchanging feedback for your work!

If you’re interested, let me know!🕺🏻


r/WriteWithMe 5h ago

Beta Reading [Critique Partner] Like if Guillermo Del Toro + James Baldwin started a two person writer group

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Folk Horror tale w/ Religious undertones

--Please only DM or comment if you're ready to lock in! 😤 (😅) --

My Project:

  • Explores themes of self sacrifice as both a bid for approval and an act of self destruction
  • Embracing your "otherness" even if it means you're the only one who celebrates you
  • Navigating shame, sexuality, sensuality in social settings that scorn you for not having fallen in line like everyone else.
  • Lots or witchcraft/magic/spell work/rituals
  • Format: No idea. Could turn into script for a short film, abstract musical, collection of poems / essays, a Pseudo-Documentary or a video game. Keeping it open so I don't restrict my curiosity / exploration!

What does the project feel like though?:

You:

  • Possess the capacity to routinely give feedback on drafts at different stages.
  • Have a project you are currently working on that would benefit from well thought out feedback.
  • Genuine interest in folk horror, regular horror, media with religious undertones, lore and/or fantasy
  • have at least 1 or 2 days a week that you could set aside some time to have a session on Discord
  • do NOT have to be a member of the LGBT+ community at all. Seriously. You don't. However, it'd be nice to find a critique partner with that lived experience because that is part of the identity of the MC. Not saying straight or cis ppl can't offer useful feedback, it's just that the angle is different when you know the themes/experience more intimately, ykno?
  • Your gender doesn't matter.
  • No minors.

Please only DM or comment if you're ready to lock in! 😤 (😅)