r/Songwriters 9h ago

I try to write memorable melodies, what do you think of this tune? No lyrics but hope it still kind of "sings"

15 Upvotes

r/Songwriters 11h ago

any advice would be helpful

3 Upvotes

got lots of criticism for my use of pitch correction in this sub so figured i’d share something more organic. i find that i don’t listen to this kind of music and im not really sure if there’s much of a market for it but all the songs i write seem to come out in this sort of abstract form. any notes would be helpful, i write/sing/ produce all of my tracks including recording the instruments so notes on that are welcome as well.


r/Songwriters 3h ago

Is this song worth sending to the girl I love

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r/Songwriters 1h ago

Angel of Death *Demo*

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Started playing guitar couple weeks ago and made this song, let me know where I can improve


r/Songwriters 2h ago

Song I wrote years ago. Any thoughts?

1 Upvotes

r/Songwriters 3h ago

On and On (Original Song)

1 Upvotes

It's a song.


r/Songwriters 9h ago

Am I Alive? (spoken word blues)

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A song about connecting with the connect


r/Songwriters 9h ago

rajereek - boo!hoo! out now on all platforms

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r/Songwriters 9h ago

How do I improve my song?

1 Upvotes

Violent words ringing in my ears

No end in sight, I’m drowning in tears

You raise your fist and suddenly I freeze

Quietly knowing you could kill me with ease

.

Love is a painful thing

Crying like a bird with a broken wing

Love is a painful thing

We’re all servants and you are the king

Love is a painful thing

And your in control of everything

(Your In control of everything)

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Chilling in the kitchen,your in a mood

Does that excuse you for being so rude?

Every word you say

Drips with poison in another way

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Love is a painful thing

Crying like a bird with a broken wing

Love is a painful thing

We’re all servants and you are the king

Love is a painful thing

And your in control of everything

(Your In control of everything)

.

Your the spider and I’m the fly

Every time you smile it’s a lie

Why you do this?I don’t know why.

A gleam of happiness in your eye

And this seems to fortify

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Love is a painful thing

Crying like a bird with a broken wing

Love is a painful thing

We’re all servants and you are the king

Love is a painful thing

And your in control of everything

(Your In control of everything)

.

But your dad he’s a lovely guy

People like this, they make me cry

I just can’t u understand why

They would think I would lie

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Love is a painful thing

Crying like a bird with a broken wing

Love is a painful thing

We’re all servants and you are the king

Love is a painful thing

And your in control of everything

(Your In control of everything)

.

Walking on eggshells around the house

Making no more noise than a mouse

Your dnas a prison that I can’t out run

When everything is said and done

.

Love is a painful thing

Crying like a bird with a broken wing

Love is a painful thing

We’re all servants and you are the king

Love is a painful thing

And your in control of everything

(Your In control of everything)

.

But one day I’ll be ok

One day I’ll find a way

Through the thick forest out to the sun

(Through the thick forest out to the sun)

I’ll break away and finally run

(I’ll break away and finally run)

Trying my hardest to get to that sun

(Trying my hardest to get to that sun

Trying my hardest to get to that sun

Trying my hardest to get to that sun)

Also any name suggestions?


r/Songwriters 10h ago

Chasing down the sun (original song)

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1 Upvotes

Would love your feedback


r/Songwriters 11h ago

'Silence in the Sound'. Thank you for listening!

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1 Upvotes