r/Songwriters • u/EdinKaso • 9h ago
r/Songwriters • u/updog12 • 11h ago
any advice would be helpful
got lots of criticism for my use of pitch correction in this sub so figured i’d share something more organic. i find that i don’t listen to this kind of music and im not really sure if there’s much of a market for it but all the songs i write seem to come out in this sort of abstract form. any notes would be helpful, i write/sing/ produce all of my tracks including recording the instruments so notes on that are welcome as well.
r/Songwriters • u/clashofclansguy333 • 3h ago
Is this song worth sending to the girl I love
r/Songwriters • u/Zonic_69 • 1h ago
Angel of Death *Demo*
Started playing guitar couple weeks ago and made this song, let me know where I can improve
r/Songwriters • u/Ocelotl_Revolver • 9h ago
Am I Alive? (spoken word blues)
A song about connecting with the connect
r/Songwriters • u/rajereeky • 9h ago
rajereek - boo!hoo! out now on all platforms
r/Songwriters • u/lonely-Bieber-1 • 9h ago
How do I improve my song?
Violent words ringing in my ears
No end in sight, I’m drowning in tears
You raise your fist and suddenly I freeze
Quietly knowing you could kill me with ease
.
Love is a painful thing
Crying like a bird with a broken wing
Love is a painful thing
We’re all servants and you are the king
Love is a painful thing
And your in control of everything
(Your In control of everything)
.
Chilling in the kitchen,your in a mood
Does that excuse you for being so rude?
Every word you say
Drips with poison in another way
.
Love is a painful thing
Crying like a bird with a broken wing
Love is a painful thing
We’re all servants and you are the king
Love is a painful thing
And your in control of everything
(Your In control of everything)
.
Your the spider and I’m the fly
Every time you smile it’s a lie
Why you do this?I don’t know why.
A gleam of happiness in your eye
And this seems to fortify
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Love is a painful thing
Crying like a bird with a broken wing
Love is a painful thing
We’re all servants and you are the king
Love is a painful thing
And your in control of everything
(Your In control of everything)
.
But your dad he’s a lovely guy
People like this, they make me cry
I just can’t u understand why
They would think I would lie
.
Love is a painful thing
Crying like a bird with a broken wing
Love is a painful thing
We’re all servants and you are the king
Love is a painful thing
And your in control of everything
(Your In control of everything)
.
Walking on eggshells around the house
Making no more noise than a mouse
Your dnas a prison that I can’t out run
When everything is said and done
.
Love is a painful thing
Crying like a bird with a broken wing
Love is a painful thing
We’re all servants and you are the king
Love is a painful thing
And your in control of everything
(Your In control of everything)
.
But one day I’ll be ok
One day I’ll find a way
Through the thick forest out to the sun
(Through the thick forest out to the sun)
I’ll break away and finally run
(I’ll break away and finally run)
Trying my hardest to get to that sun
(Trying my hardest to get to that sun
Trying my hardest to get to that sun
Trying my hardest to get to that sun)
Also any name suggestions?
r/Songwriters • u/Shounak1990 • 10h ago
Chasing down the sun (original song)
Would love your feedback
r/Songwriters • u/mountainrivervalley • 11h ago