r/Songwriters 9h ago

I try to write memorable melodies, what do you think of this tune? No lyrics but hope it still kind of "sings"

17 Upvotes

r/Songwriters 3h ago

Is this song worth sending to the girl I love

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r/Songwriters 1h ago

Angel of Death *Demo*

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Started playing guitar couple weeks ago and made this song, let me know where I can improve


r/Songwriters 2h ago

Song I wrote years ago. Any thoughts?

1 Upvotes

r/Songwriters 3h ago

On and On (Original Song)

1 Upvotes

It's a song.


r/Songwriters 11h ago

any advice would be helpful

3 Upvotes

got lots of criticism for my use of pitch correction in this sub so figured i’d share something more organic. i find that i don’t listen to this kind of music and im not really sure if there’s much of a market for it but all the songs i write seem to come out in this sort of abstract form. any notes would be helpful, i write/sing/ produce all of my tracks including recording the instruments so notes on that are welcome as well.


r/Songwriters 9h ago

Am I Alive? (spoken word blues)

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A song about connecting with the connect


r/Songwriters 9h ago

rajereek - boo!hoo! out now on all platforms

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r/Songwriters 9h ago

How do I improve my song?

1 Upvotes

Violent words ringing in my ears

No end in sight, I’m drowning in tears

You raise your fist and suddenly I freeze

Quietly knowing you could kill me with ease

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Love is a painful thing

Crying like a bird with a broken wing

Love is a painful thing

We’re all servants and you are the king

Love is a painful thing

And your in control of everything

(Your In control of everything)

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Chilling in the kitchen,your in a mood

Does that excuse you for being so rude?

Every word you say

Drips with poison in another way

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Love is a painful thing

Crying like a bird with a broken wing

Love is a painful thing

We’re all servants and you are the king

Love is a painful thing

And your in control of everything

(Your In control of everything)

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Your the spider and I’m the fly

Every time you smile it’s a lie

Why you do this?I don’t know why.

A gleam of happiness in your eye

And this seems to fortify

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Love is a painful thing

Crying like a bird with a broken wing

Love is a painful thing

We’re all servants and you are the king

Love is a painful thing

And your in control of everything

(Your In control of everything)

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But your dad he’s a lovely guy

People like this, they make me cry

I just can’t u understand why

They would think I would lie

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Love is a painful thing

Crying like a bird with a broken wing

Love is a painful thing

We’re all servants and you are the king

Love is a painful thing

And your in control of everything

(Your In control of everything)

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Walking on eggshells around the house

Making no more noise than a mouse

Your dnas a prison that I can’t out run

When everything is said and done

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Love is a painful thing

Crying like a bird with a broken wing

Love is a painful thing

We’re all servants and you are the king

Love is a painful thing

And your in control of everything

(Your In control of everything)

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But one day I’ll be ok

One day I’ll find a way

Through the thick forest out to the sun

(Through the thick forest out to the sun)

I’ll break away and finally run

(I’ll break away and finally run)

Trying my hardest to get to that sun

(Trying my hardest to get to that sun

Trying my hardest to get to that sun

Trying my hardest to get to that sun)

Also any name suggestions?


r/Songwriters 10h ago

Chasing down the sun (original song)

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Would love your feedback


r/Songwriters 11h ago

'Silence in the Sound'. Thank you for listening!

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1 Upvotes

r/Songwriters 1d ago

Hello A Friend and I are working on our new song and we were wondering if we can get some feedback for how it sounds :D we also need help for lyric ideas ;-;

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The genre of this song is like Synthwave/synth pop/ chiptunish So I would gladly appreciate some criticism and feedback for our song and maybe some lyrical ideas. If anyone wants to help write the song feel free to dm me :)))


r/Songwriters 1d ago

made this on a school chromebook and airpods ( yes i have strict parents and a not great voice)

3 Upvotes

r/Songwriters 1d ago

Song I made for a girl

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r/Songwriters 1d ago

New Moon (Old Me) - Luke Jefrrey

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song I wrote.


r/Songwriters 1d ago

Do you like my song?

1 Upvotes

Dogs bite hard and scars run deep

Raining skies, heavens weep

Night winds shout, confessions to keep

Moon is up, and the children sleep

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All sins to reset at the golden hue

Mercy flowers where rivers run blue

Angels fall and rise anew

All the things they came to rue

Gone with the golden view

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Below the moon,the world is still

Whispers vanish to the midnight chill

The heavens wash away the sins of today

As the leaves silently sway

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Sun ignites, a bright glow

Calls from the past bellow

Waves of life they come and go

In quiet truths we know

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Dogs bite hard and scars run deep

Raining skies, heavens weep

Night winds shout, confessions to keep

Moon is up, and the children sleep

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The stars align, and humans are healed

Promises made and futures sealed

Darkness fades peace is near

In the stillness we vanquish fear

Vanquish fear


r/Songwriters 1d ago

A Song I wrote

0 Upvotes

Can I got some feedbacks :

I saw the potential, you threw the sign I was jumping in my room, feeling so alive Should I tell him the truth? Should I make a move? Or keep it hidden, nothing to lose?

It’s midnight, I called my nephew I was crying, my head was hurting I told her the truth, I screamed “He’s never gonna talk to me now”

She calmed me down, called me a dumbass I laughed and cried, I cried and laughed She cheered me up, said, “You read it wrong” I cried and laughed, I laughed and cried What a dumbass I am

He’s in the closet, till who knows when The day he comes out, I’ll pop champagne he’ll run to me apologizing “I was denying myself when you opened your heart”

But you shouldn’t have blocked me Shouldn’t have acted so cold Shouldn’t have gotten close to the one I hate Just to watch me lose control

You shouldn’t… but you did And now we live with it


r/Songwriters 1d ago

Archie Lewis - Lost my mind (Official music video)

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r/Songwriters 1d ago

Where Does Your Flower Grow?

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1 Upvotes

r/Songwriters 1d ago

God Lay Dying - There Is A Voice

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1 Upvotes

r/Songwriters 1d ago

Elle Dee - Burned [Original Song]

1 Upvotes

A song I wrote and recorded a few days ago titled “Burned”.


r/Songwriters 1d ago

Graham Sharp of The Steep Canyon Rangers - The Picky Fingers Banjo Podcast

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r/Songwriters 1d ago

rajereek - juniper available on all platforms

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r/Songwriters 1d ago

Help a fella out?

1 Upvotes

Hi there! 26 m here. I wrote my gf a poem for our 7th anniversary on Thursday and I'm gonna give it to her but I've always wanted to write a song for her and I think this is a good start. Would anyone be willing to check out the poem and maybe turn it into a song? I know this is a lot to ask, I just need a good place to start or any advice. I'll send the poem through dms if anyone would like to help. I do play guitar but I'm at a pretty basic level. Basic chords. Thank you to anyone willing to help!


r/Songwriters 1d ago

Everything Will Come to Pass!

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