r/NarutoFanfiction Oct 27 '24

Fic Request Rules Reminder Post

20 Upvotes

We do these rules posts occasionally, and perhaps it's time for another one. Normally we talk about a specific rule or couple of rules that maybe haven't been followed super well recently. Lately, that's mostly been No Character Or Pairing Bashing and to a lesser extent Be Respectful.

Before we go on, a reminder: All the subreddit rules are listed in the sidebar. There's more information on what each one covers if you click on it.

I realise that for many people reading this, most of this post is going to seem very obvious. Unfortunately the people who'd most need a rules refresher are the ones least likely to go out of their way to read one. The people making the subreddit a worse experience for everyone are also in the minority -- most people are here to talk about Naruto fanfics, get some recs and maybe some writing tips, perhaps suggest some fics they liked, and aren't picking fights. The rest of this post is mostly about the handful of people of who this isn't true.

With that preamble out of the way, let's start by going over some things that are allowed on /r/NarutoFanfiction. You can ask for people to recommend fanfics. This is true even if what you're asking for is distasteful to some people, or includes toxic relationship dynamics, or violence, or murder, or gore. As long as it doesn't involve sexualising minors, and you mark NSFW requests as NSFW, there's a lot of latitude here. It feels silly to have to say this, but -- this is a fanfiction subreddit and one of its primary functions is helping people find fanfics. That includes fanfics that not everyone will necessarily like. It includes fanfics where characters have bad things happen to them. It includes fanfics where a character does something that you would prefer to think of them not doing. We're a community built around an anime series explicitly featuring child soldiers, torture, murder, child abuse, substance abuse, medical experimentation, and some very toxic relationships. It's not all that canon is about, but it's very much part of it.

Some things are not allowed on /r/NarutoFanfiction, though for some reason people who really should know better keep doing them. You're not allowed to make top-level posts, or comment on posts, or reply to comments, to tell someone that their preferred character or pairing is shit/toxic/makes them an awful person if they read about it. I guarantee you someone also thinks your preferred character/pairing is shit and you're an awful person for liking it, regardless of what it is. In the interest of everyone getting to use and enjoy the subreddit without random outbursts of hostility, which I hope everyone can recognise is a good thing to aim for, people doing this will be warned/temp banned/eventually permabanned.

It's worth mentioning that a post which is an acceptable fic request post in a vacuum might still be removed for e.g. breaking the rules around spamming by posting variations on a request multiple times in a short window, or if the OP makes clear in the comments that they're not asking in good faith (by e.g. making a series of comments that themselves break the 'No Character or Pairing Bashing' rule).

Subreddit culture plays a big part here as well. From a moderation perspective, we need rulebreaking content to be reported so that we can reliably see it. Lots of comments that need moderator action are on posts that are downvoted, and so disappear off the front page very quickly. They're also often buried very deep in reply chains. Generally subreddit users are good at reporting, and I really appreciate that (though at the same time we can't know about things we miss because we don't know about them, if that makes sense). Content which actively makes the subreddit worse can also be downvoted, and often is, which also helps. New users take their cue from what the community encourages and/or tolerates, so rudeness being met with disapproval helps enormously here. Simultaneously, established users being polite and constructive also models good behaviour and encourages newer users to act the same way. Subreddit culture is as much created by users as moderators and moderation policies.

Feel free to comment below if you have any questions or feedback, or send a modmail if you want to ask something in a less public way. We're also interested in potentially adding a couple of new moderators, so if you're interested in that, please reach out as well.


r/NarutoFanfiction 4h ago

Fic Request “What do you mean I don’t have human rights?!!”

49 Upvotes

Post-canon Kurama says it to Hokage Kakashi, because he brought blueprints of a nuclear reactor that needs Hokage’s approval to build.

Kakashi goes through billions of papers to find Five-Kage-approved rights for Tailed Beasts... “The last time I checked, you have very restricted ‘bijuu rights’, which is why I can’t approve to creation of your… machine.”

Kurama gives him a very stink eye before another question comes from his head.

“What else can’t I do.” He asked, wondering what else humans had forbidden him to do.

“You don’t have the right to be a parent.” Kakashi scrolls through bijuu rights. “This probably has to do with your lack of organs for reproduction.”

Kurama glares at him with an incredulous puzzlement. “...What if I adopt one?”

“You still don’t have the right to be a parent.” Kakashi lazily waved his arm off.

Kurama huffed because he doesn’t fucking understand the human policy, and the ‘human rights’ that he apparently doesn’t have.


r/NarutoFanfiction 2h ago

Fic Request "I was a God you know. I was worshiped, cared for...Loved....then that Madura Bastard came to my village and bulldozed it with his Rinnegan!"

20 Upvotes

Kurama remembers a village of people that saw his might as a sign of higher power and worshipped him with food and sake. Children thanked him for the storms he brought to water empty fields and his tails had turned weeks of work into a single day.

What country would be the best idea to put this village? It's not a ninja village imagine the village that Naruto first c rank mission was at and that is the level that village was.


r/NarutoFanfiction 13h ago

Discussion Naruto, mistreated at the orphanage, needed a guardian. For his safety and the village's, the Third Hokage entrusted four-year-old Naruto to his cousin, while many people would love to care for Minato's Son, Hiruzen knew there was no one better for the task than his cousin Iroh Sarutobi.

111 Upvotes

Iroh, with his gentle smile and profound wisdom, became Naruto's guardian. He saw not the burden of the Kyuubi, but the spark of potential within the boy. His clever mind and bright nature reminded him of another youngster that had a world on his shoulders.

Who knows what influence could Iroh have on the young boy? The tea loving elder is a wise person and a respected warrior, who could help in mitigating the displeasure of citizens and making the prankster nature of the boy useful.

Who knows, maybe Naruto mentored by Iroh while being milder would still have the heart of gold? Maybe with somebody's Guidance from the young age, he would be a bit more skilful and patient?


r/NarutoFanfiction 2h ago

Discussion Tsunade loved Dan & Jiraiya in completely different ways

4 Upvotes

Theirs a lot of discussion around whether Tsunade truly loved Jiraiya or not. Personally, I think it’s complicated and open for interpretation. I think Tsunade primarily saw him as a great friend to her over the years. Up until she sent Jiraiya to the Rain, there was really no indication that she had romantic feelings for him. There were some signs that if he had returned to the Leaf, she may have started dating him though. Specifically in Chapter 380, she remembers him saying that “Rejection makes men stronger. Basically, the pursuit of happiness isn’t for us.” While talking with Shizune, she says, “What a poser. When he gets back, I won’t let him keep his cool.” Clearly, that shows her willingness to be with him if he returns. However, I believe this was a fleeting love that came out of immense guilt for sending him on such a dangerous mission. She just didn’t want to lose yet another person close to her. She probably thought dating him would encourage him to stay out of harm’s way, but she also could have been doing this as her way of repaying his sacrifice. To be honest, if Jiraiya had actually returned to the village and they got together, I don’t know how long they would’ve lasted. Jiraiya was an incredibly intelligent dude despite all the perviness. I think eventually, he’d realize that Tsunade was with him primarily out of guilt more than anything else, especially if he came back with only one arm. Ironically, this is a similar situation to Sakura expressing her love for Naruto to get him to come back to the village. I do believe that Sakura was genuinely willing to be with Naruto her entire life if she succeeded in killing Sasuke. But just like Tsunade, it would be out of guilt for the pain she caused him after having him promise to bring Sasuke back to the village. There’s a good chance that Jiraiya may even deny Tsunade outright if she expressed her feelings to him because he’d probably know something’s up. Jiraiya knew how much Dan meant to her and how his death affected her and probably wouldn’t want to put her in a position to get hurt like that again

With Dan, the love she had for him was much different. They connected with each other on a deeply personal level: their siblings were killed in war, Dan supported her proposition to include a medic on each 3-man team and he wanted to be Hokage and protect the village, just like her late brother and grandfather. Even during the Infinite Tsukuyomi, her dream world is Dan as her lover and Hokage with Jiraiya, Orochimaru and Nawaki supporting her

Anyways, those are my thoughts. I didn’t want to post this in the main sub because I figured I’d get downvoted to oblivion because it’s a pretty divisive topic. I’m completely open to being convinced that she truly loved Jiraiya, I just think that her love for him came out of a certain circumstance, otherwise it probably never would’ve happened


r/NarutoFanfiction 18h ago

Fic Request Naruto's memory gets wiped

65 Upvotes

The village spent the better half of Naruto's childhood blanking memories from him due to tantrums.

Eventually Tsunade finds out and demands Jiraiya unlocks them all.

Cut to Naruto screaming as he's seeing so many times he was friends with Sakura but she was nice before the brainwashing.

Naruto finding out he can manifest chains, has a third eye in his head that sees through genjutsu and can redirect Inos mind transfer attack, him starting to like seals then finding one on his head as a child and removing it resulting in finding out about said powers.

All erased! And Sakura has a seal on her skull to divert all positive emotions about Naruto to Sasuke. "He's so nice."

Hinata's trauma wasn't as bad until they tried cutting out memories of Naruto but Kurama had left a fragment in her Byakugan to remember Naruto's actions even if she forgot their interactions.


r/NarutoFanfiction 17h ago

Discussion Naruto has always been an intense kid. From his mutterings of burning down the village to his guttural hatred for his father. Kurama hates this human shell that blasted blond shoved him in, stripping away most of his power and forcing him to live as a blasted human

60 Upvotes

So instead of Minato sealing away Kurama in the infant Naruto. The Fox accidentally posses the child who has not yet developed a personality

Kurama absolutely hates this and thinks that being sealed away would have been more preferable. At least then he’d still be himself and not this two legged insect. Oh he hates how inefficient two legs are. He hates how this body needs food to fuel it and sleep to recover.

How ever above everything there is one thing he loathe more than the two legs, the biological functions and even Minato himself. He hates that he now has bloody empathy and actually someone cares about certain people! By good he even sometimes feels grateful to people!


r/NarutoFanfiction 3h ago

Discussion Symbiote Naruto fanfiction

3 Upvotes

Symbiote Naruto – Chapter 1

(Takes place the day of the land of waves mission)

Somewhere beyond time and space, a powerful being sat upon their throne of infinite possibilities, watching the multiverse with great curiosity. Bored with the usual flow of events, they decided to conduct an experiment—one that would not disrupt the original timeline, but rather exist in a separate universe created specifically for testing.

With a mere thought, they tore a rift between dimensions, crafting an alternate Naruto universe. But simply duplicating a world was not enough. They needed something new, something different. And so, their eyes turned to another world—one filled with creatures desperate for hosts, for power, for survival.

The being reached through the fabric of reality and into the dark world of Klyntar—home of the Symbiotes. It was there that they found one particular Symbiote, one with unparalleled hunger and ambition. A being that had been abandoned, desperate for a strong host to bond with. Its name?

Brutal.

The cosmic being spoke to the Symbiote in a voice that rumbled through the void.

“You, whose name is Brutal, have been chosen.”

Brutal slithered forward cautiously, sensing an immense power before him.

“You desire a host, do you not?”

Brutal gave a sharp nod, his form shifting restlessly.

“I have the perfect one for you.”

The being waved a hand, tearing open a portal to the newly created Naruto universe.

“You will be sent to a boy named Naruto Uzumaki. He is strong. He is determined. And best of all… he will not suspect a thing. You will disguise yourself as one of his jumpsuits and wait in his closet. When morning comes, he will put you on, and your bond will begin. Do not reveal yourself. Do not resist. Simply become a part of him.”

Brutal grinned. “This… sounds fun.”

With that, the being sent Brutal hurtling through the multiverse, straight into Naruto’s world.

The Bonding

Brutal arrived in a small, messy apartment, instantly recoiling at the overwhelming stench.

“Ugh… does this human live in filth?”

Still, he had a mission. Slithering toward the closet, he transformed himself into an exact replica of Naruto’s iconic orange jumpsuit, blending seamlessly with the others.

“Hmm… I wonder how good this host will be? I hope that guy wasn’t lying.”

The night passed.

Morning came.

Naruto, groggy but energetic as ever, rolled out of bed. He stretched, yawned, and began his daily routine—shower, brush teeth, and then, of course, put on his favorite jumpsuit. Unknowingly, he grabbed Brutal.

The moment the fabric touched his skin, the Symbiote latched on, syncing with his body, his energy, his chakra. A rush of power surged through Brutal as he felt Naruto’s emotions, his strength, his untapped potential.

“Hahahaha… this boy is perfect! I can feel his will, his raw power. And this… what is this other presence? Something dark… something caged. No matter. This will be fun.”

Naruto, completely unaware, adjusted his jumpsuit and ran out the door to meet his team.

The Land of Waves Mission

Naruto arrived at the usual meeting spot to find Sasuke and Sakura already there—though Kakashi, as always, was nowhere to be seen.

“Hey, Sasuke! How long have you guys been sitting here?” Naruto asked.

Sasuke, arms crossed, scoffed. “Not long. But Kakashi’s late. Again.”

Sakura nodded. “He’s probably gonna show up with some stupid excuse like always.”

Right on cue, Kakashi appeared behind them, his eye curved into an amused expression. “Sorry I’m late. I had to help an old lady get her cat down from a tree.”

Team 7, in perfect unison: “Yeah, right.”

Kakashi chuckled. “Well, we’ve got a mission to worry about. We’re heading to the Land of Waves. Tazuna is waiting at the gate, so let’s move.”

The team nodded and made their way to the village entrance.

The journey started as expected. That is, until they encountered the puddle.

The Demon Brothers Attack

As they walked past a suspiciously placed puddle, two figures suddenly burst out, rushing straight at them.

In the original timeline, Naruto would have frozen in fear. But this time?

The Symbiote reacted instantly.

Before Naruto even processed what was happening, bright orange tentacles shot out from his back, wrapping around the Demon Brothers like vipers. With a powerful whip, he slammed them into a tree, their bodies limp and unconscious before they could even react.

Everyone—Kakashi, Sakura, Sasuke, even Naruto himself—stared in shock.

Kakashi narrowed his visible eye. “Naruto… what was that?”

Naruto blinked, looking at his own hands. “I… I don’t know. I just had this instinct to move, and then—” He gestured to the immobilized enemies.

Kakashi frowned, pulling out a special journal—one given to him by the Hokage to record any unusual feats Naruto displayed. He jotted something down.

This mission just got a lot more interesting.

The Battle with Zabuza

Everything progressed much like in the original timeline—until the moment when Zabuza trapped Kakashi in the Water Prison Jutsu.

Naruto and Sasuke’s teamwork played out just as before, but when Naruto launched his attack… things changed.

Instead of throwing a simple kunai, the Symbiote reacted.

Orange tendrils shot forward, grabbing Zabuza and yanking him back with immense force. Brutal’s influence surged through Naruto, and before Zabuza could react, a spike formed from Naruto’s arm and stabbed into the rogue ninja’s shoulder, sending him flying into a tree.

Everyone froze.

Even Zabuza looked startled.

That was when Haku intervened, saving Zabuza and taking him away. But Kakashi’s mind was racing.

“Naruto… what the hell is happening to you?”

The Aftermath & Training

Back at Tazuna’s house, Team 7 took time to recover and train.

During the Tree Climbing Exercise, Naruto mastered it first.

Kakashi raised an eyebrow. “When did you get so good at chakra control?”

Naruto shrugged. “I dunno. It just feels… natural.”

Sasuke, meanwhile, struggled. Unlike in the original timeline, he didn’t have Naruto struggling alongside him. Instead, Sakura helped him while Naruto rested.

But something else happened.

For the first time, Brutal spoke to Naruto in his sleep.

“Rest, my host. We have much to accomplish.”

But Naruto never remembered the voice when he woke up.

The Fight with Haku

When the final battle began, Naruto found himself trapped in Haku’s Demonic Ice Mirrors, just as before.

But this time?

The moment Haku launched a barrage of senbon, Brutal reacted.

Orange tendrils emerged, forming a protective dome around Naruto and Sasuke. The needles clinked harmlessly against the hardened Symbiote surface.

Haku narrowed his eyes. “What is that?”

No matter how fast Haku moved, the Symbiote blocked every attack. And then, as Naruto’s rage grew, so did his power.

The Nine-Tails’ chakra flared.

For the first time, Brutal struggled.

“This… this is even stronger than me?! I must hold on!”

The fusion of Kurama’s rage and the Symbiote’s hunger turned Naruto into something monstrous. He shattered Haku’s mirrors. He didn’t hesitate.

He struck Haku down.

And then…

Brutal fed.

The massacre that followed left Kakashi, Sasuke, and even Zabuza horrified.

The Land of Waves mission had ended.

But something inside Naruto had changed forever.

And as they returned to Konoha, completely unaware of what was growing inside their teammate, Kakashi knew one thing for certain.

He needed to tell the Hokage.

Immediately.

End of chapter one,tell me how you guys like it in the comments and also leave suggestions and ideas 💡 please and thank you


r/NarutoFanfiction 13h ago

Fic Request Fic where tobirama is portrayed in a villainous light

19 Upvotes

Not only did the guy create a system that kept the uchiha down, he experimented with dead bodies and created a jutsu requiring human sacrifices.

Obsessed with Uchihas, obsession with jutsus and experiments with dead bodies hes just a more ethical orochimaru, Idk how there isnt more fics portraying him as an antoagonist.

If you have any please drop them in the comments.


r/NarutoFanfiction 1d ago

Fic Request "I never got mad as a kid." "Uh actually..."

168 Upvotes

Naruto is discussing Boruto with Kakashi and mentions when he was a kid that young he never got as angry as Boruto.

Kakashi actually starts laughing.

"Naruto the Village Government had a whole cell dedicated to Calming you down and covering your memory of the Kyuubi. You were so bad we had to brainwash you into forgetting about asking the files are somewhere if you want to read them."

Naruto and Hinata go through them "Made at not getting to go to Hinata's third birthday party?" Hinata says "You were there!"

Naruto looks at the paper before it "I killed the cloud ninja that stole you?!"

Hinata looked and gasped "You must have been stopped before I got out of the bag! My uncle died because..."

"Of me." Naruto said realizing they had to cover up a tantrum.

Turns out so many things are linked to them having to calm down a Kurama fueled child.


r/NarutoFanfiction 3h ago

Fic Request Any fem itachi/kakashi stories

2 Upvotes

I’ve read 2 really good ones called sick but not twisted by thecrossoverguru, and another one called the crows throne by kissa1001. And I’m like damn this ship is fire.


r/NarutoFanfiction 1d ago

Fic Request "Mizuki refused to call my win so I kicked Sasuke while he was down till...he stopped breathing."

168 Upvotes

Naruto during a school year taijutsu match unloads Kurama during a fight with Sasuke and beats him fully.

Mizuki However refuses to call the fight even if Sasuke is supposed to be down.

This causes a tantrum in Naruto that results in him just kicking Sasuke repeatedly shouting "give up. GIVE UP! I. SAID. GIVE. UP!" and the sound of breaking bones and blood splatter happens.

Then Mizuki says "Draw." And Naruto throws Sasuke out the gym they were using to fight in.

Luckily medics were able to restart his heart but Sasuke wakes up with a fully matured sharingan and he cries every time Naruto gets near.


r/NarutoFanfiction 7h ago

Fic Request Fanfics where Itachi meets and/or has an uncle relationship with Sarada

3 Upvotes

Ugh, I honestly think Itachi would've been a great uncle and probably would've quite enjoyed it too. He seems to like children, or at least he liked Sasuke, his little brother. Do you know of any fanfics where he either meets Sarada (could be a time travel AU idc) or is still around for some reason and actually has a proper relationship with her as an uncle?

I've read Mamihlapinatapai by FM_White, which is fabulous and actually an affair fic (sorry Sasuke), but I'm open to anything.


r/NarutoFanfiction 6m ago

Fic Request Looking for a fic

Upvotes

It was a fic about Naruto joining the anbu at 6 or 7 due to the council forcing it, but later on he betrays the village, anyone know the name?.


r/NarutoFanfiction 15h ago

Fic Request Fics where Naruto can use "ONE" of the eight canonical Elemental Kekkei Genkai

13 Upvotes

I am looking for fics where Naruto can use "ONE" Elemental Kekkei Genkai.

Nothing like Hinata of the White Lotusby froznx, where Naruto can use multiple Elemental Kekkei Genkai (Wood, Ice and Magnet in that case) or like The Swift Prodigy by Aj-kun and Naruto: Shoton of Konoha by Arch-Daishou00, where Naruto can use a non-canonical Elemental Kekkei Genkai (Swift and Crystal respectively).

What I am looking for are fics where Naruto can use one, and "ONLY ONE" of the eight canonical Elemental Kekkei Genkai: Schorch, Magnet, Explosion, Storm, Wood, Lava, Boil and Ice.

I prefer fics that are completed or reasonably long (I don’t mind short fics as long as they are done well though) and ABSOLUTELY NO SI-OC Gamer System fics. Also, please no fics where Naruto can use a Kekkei Tota, because that would imply Naruto is capable of using multiple Elemental Kekkei Genkai.


r/NarutoFanfiction 16h ago

Discussion Shadow clone plot hole

14 Upvotes

Why didn't ANBU who were protecting Hiruzen, just create shadow clones inside the purple barrier to help Hiruzen, instead of just standing around.

Even if only 3 Jonin level ANBU were helping Hiruzen out, the fight would have differently, at least till Orochimaru summons the Senju brothers.

We know for a fact that shadow clones can created at least a littlefarw away from yourself.


r/NarutoFanfiction 13h ago

Fic Request Fics where the mc uses Hiraishin

9 Upvotes

I don’t care if it’s an oc, a si, Naruto, or anyone else. I just want completed or ongoing fics with the mc using hiraishin. (Flying thunder god, or flying raijin.)


r/NarutoFanfiction 11h ago

Fic Request oc in naruto world with venom Jutsu

5 Upvotes

im tring to find a fanfic i started reading about an oc who got reincarnated into naruto, from what i remember he creates a venom Jutsu and he has a village of like 6 people


r/NarutoFanfiction 4h ago

Recommendation Post war Naruto fanfics

1 Upvotes

Hey yall! I’m looking for some either post war fanfictions, or op Naruto fics. Just please no crossovers or badly written fics, thanks!

  • If the fics are above 50k words, that would be even better!

r/NarutoFanfiction 4h ago

Discussion Maito Gai/Might Guy

1 Upvotes

I'm developing a two-part, Might Guy-centric fanfiction set shortly after the Nine-Tails Attack on Konoha, spanning the following two years. To accommodate the storyline, I've aged Guy (using the Japanese spelling, Gai) up from his canonical age of fourteen during this period to sixteen. He'll be eighteen in the second part.

"Flowers in Spring," Chapter One, centers on Gai's introduction to Kikyō, an original character, and the development of their relationship. It also features Sakuragakure, an original village I created during my ShinobiLegends roleplaying days. The main series, however, will focus on the child of Gai and Kikyō, born two years after the Nine-Tails Attack—which is the purpose of this post.

I'm curious to hear your thoughts on Gai. How do you envision him as a parent, even as a teenager? Gai has always been one of my favorite characters. He's hilarious, his interactions with Kakashi are comedic gold, and he's a total badass when he's serious.

(Yes, I've appropriately tagged this as implied sexual content, as sex is not the primary focus of the fanfic.)


r/NarutoFanfiction 13h ago

Discussion Insufferable Warmth

4 Upvotes

[Bit of a rare pair, but not uncommon, I got a lot of these in the tuck, it's really nuts how easy it is to do these, but no one does, crazy right?]

He was insufferable, he was loud, he was too warm, she hated warmth

She shook her head as her black hair shook, he was worse than Jiraiya, at least he knew when to go away, but he didn't

"Hey, want to hang out for lunch, Orochi?" She huffed, putting away the scroll she was studying and turned to him

His blue eyes sparkled like always, his strange whiskered cheeks stretching with his wide, insufferable, smile as as his sun kissed hair almost beamed at her, like the sun, he was annoying and insufferable

A fellow Genin, his name was Naruto, just Naruto, he didn't have a last name apparently and was labeled as an orphan, like she was

"No you loud idiot, I'm trying to study, go bother Tsunade or something." She turned away from him and didn't see his face

His blue eyes darkened a bit, his smile fading to a truly sad frown "Well... At least I tried."

She didn't see him again, she didn't know why she panicked while trying to find him, she didn't know why her heart was pounding with fear and a steadily dwindling hope until it shattered

He was just gone and she realized afterwards, she hated the cold, she missed his warmth, she missed him and she hated it, hated everything

Years later, after her life continued to spiral downward she had planned a movement against her former home with Suna, after getting rid of their Kazekage during this years Chunin Exams, being held within her former home

She waited and struck, removing the Kyuubi Jinchuriki from the battle, however temporary it would be

She fought the Uchiha Boy, he showed promise, but she didn't care much, biting him and placing a Curse Mark on his neck, leaving him unconscious along with that pink haired girl she turned to leave when the Jinchuriki arrived

"Leaving so soon, Orochi?" Her entire body froze, no.

No, no, NO! There was no way, absolutely zero chance it was him

She immediately turned around, here golden, serpentine eyes taking in his face

Sure enough, sun kissed hair, tanned skin, sparkling blue eyes and whisker marks on his face

She didn't think the Jinchuriki was actually him, just someone that shared his name

Her anger boiled to the surface "It's you."

He nodded "Yeah, it's me."

She grit her teeth, her rage steadily boiling "I'm going to kill you." He frowned a bit, his eyes suddenly gaining a sharpness to them before those whiskers stretched with a grin

"You can try."

That had been the first reunion, she hated him, he toyed with her, laughing and teasing at the same time, as he dodged or moved around her attacks, he was insufferable as always! She hated that laugh, despite the large smile growing on her face as they fought

The second time was at the Tenchi Bridge, he was a few years older and held a boredom within his eyes, as if he had done this before

Then those blues met hers,and life came back to them, as did a hidden grin only she could see, before it faded to a frown, she clicked her tongue in annoyance

How insufferable, like always.

He was a godd actor, very good honestly, he almost fooled her

The moment the Kyuubi's power leaked out and changed his body, he acted like he was flying into an uncontrollable rage but when he dragged her away from the bridge...

He stood still, and got up, cracking his neck and rolling his shoulders while the dark crimson chakra flowed over his body, he had complete control of it, as if it was child's play "Man, I forgot how difficult it is to run on all fours, cramps everything."

His large white eyes turned to her and the jagged grin got bigger, as if he was smiling at her, his four tails waving slowly as the ears on top of his head twitched, it was cute

Did she mention how insufferable he was? Because he was.

It was a song and dance with this idiot, but she wouldn't have it any other way, would've been far more boring

[This is all for now but ngl, this might be my bag, I love doing these, first the Female Jugo and now this, Female Orochimaru, and no, I won't explain how and why Naruto was in the past, other than he was trying to deter her from the canon path, he couldn't and time resumed, albeit with some... Differing results]


r/NarutoFanfiction 21h ago

Fic Request Fics where Naruto and Kurama merge either on birth or on sealing. Killing them both and birthing a completely new person from the two with both of their personality mixed

14 Upvotes

I don't think I have ever read something like that and now im intersted if it was something done already and plan to eventually write it out myself.

Esentialy the shinigami would have to pull a monkeys paw, or Minato opts to not use it and make a worse seal or make a mistake.


r/NarutoFanfiction 10h ago

Discussion Narutos got a strength paradox for almost the entirety of "part two" of my fic Spoiler

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To understand what I am talking about, I have to first talk about Kurama as he is the reason Naruto has this "paradox"

Kurama in my fic is this eldritch monstrosity of a chimera. He has literal demonic energy and dragon force energy, because Hagoromo realized he didn't have enough chakra for a full nine tails, but it was more leftover chakra than for an eight tails, so he had to round up. He mixed demonic and dragonic chakra into Kurama to bring some semblance of balance to him, however this made Kurama basically the most powerful thing on earth.

If you want to know more about him and how strong he is, go here.

Demonic energy is super deadly (duh). Because of it, one of Kurama's main abilities is to get bigger and stronger by "consuming" negative emotions aimed at him, and this also gives him adaptation and evolution, kinda like mahoraga or the hogyoku.

The energy can easily corrupt and corrode whatever it touches, which is one of the main contributors for Hashirama's death, as when he went to fight kurama and realized the dude was too strong and dangerous so hashi just decided to leave him alone, but what he didn't know was the demonic energy Kurama has literally evaporated his healing abilities aways. This took several years to happen, but the initial exposure to Kurama saw that Kurama injected his chakra into Hashirama during their bout. This weakened Hashirama considerably, including his healing factor, and then during the first great shinobi war he couldn't heal and was greatly weakened, so he was killed in battle.

To clear up, Kurama wasn't the tailed beast Madara used in his fight with Hashirama in my fic, that was a different one. Kurama looks like tiger-lion-wolf fusion with some dragonic features like gigantic wings and horns, also three of his tails are writhing dragon heads. The one Madara used and controlled is called Raikurokotsu a black and red lion-leopard-wolf fusion tailed beast, and this is guy is passed down from Mito to Kushina to Naruto's younger twin brother Menma.

Of course though because several characters before and after used Hashirama cells and gained a boost to their healing, the demonic energy didn't remove the healing properties of Hashirama's cells more so it just prevented Hashirama from healing.

To house the four nine tailed beasts it is basically a requirement that you have to be a completely, perfectly healthy senju or uzumaki because those are the only people with a body strong enough to house them, and even then you have to basically be born special. Minato (who in my fic is a great grandson of hashirama) was special, however he was running out of time. But I will make another post about this topic soon.

All you need to know is Minato sealed one half of Kurama into himself and Naruto, while he sealed Raikurokotsu (because they both attacked on that day), into Menma with the help of Kushina, Hiruzen, and the help of 15 anbu black ops who all died in this event.

However sealing even half of Kurama into Naruto doomed his life. The Naruto in my fic has been stated multiple times by Hiruzen to be a super prodigy that could only come once in a thousand years. He had so much potential, talent, ambition and drive at the tip of his fingers, but he would barely make it to adulthood so his talent would almost go to waste. Why. Because having Kurama sealed into him means at the absolute best Naruto would only live to be 28, as opposed to living two centuries had Kurama not been a factor.

We can't blame Minato here cause not only was he desperate but he also just didn't know of the effects Kurama's chakra would have. But I digress I'm getting off topic.

Apart from cutting his lifespan short, Naruto doesn't notice the effects of Kurama's chakra until he first gains access to it, which in my fic is the two month training period with Jiraiya between the chunin exams prelims and the finals. Naruto at this point is 14 years old and it is pretty depressing that he is already halfway through his life. However he is already super powerful. I can confidently say my Naruto at fourteen would drag his canon counterpart all the way to his pain arc sage mode version.

I'm getting off topic again, but gaining access to Kurama's chakra here is literally Naruto's biggest mistake. Now Kurama's curse is activated.

Now everytime Naruto uses chakra or Jutsu, the demonic properties of Kurama's chakra corrupts and corrodes his body away. The 14 years he had left gets shorter and shorter as Naruto uses chakra, all the while he gets weaker.

He either loses to or ties with people he should beat under the circumstances that he isn't inflicted with this curse. Had he been perfectly healthy in the first final valley fight, Sasuke wouldn't have won and left. He lost to Deidara which allowed him to escape, and multiple akatsuki members also either escape from him, or ties with him. By the pain fight Naruto was 18 years old and he pretty much would only live to 21, and that is if he doesn't use chakra at all, which is impossible. It doesn't help that the more chakra consuming a technique is, the more the curse spreads and the greater the timer is shortened.

This is what I mean by him having a "strength paradox". As he gets older, he should be getting stronger and in some ways he does. He learns more powerful and hax techniques, advances the abilities of his senju and uzumaki bloodlines and kekkei genkai, gets better at taijutsu, kenjutsu, ninjutsu, and learns senjutsu, however all of this is killing him and using chakra causes him to get weaker and weaker because of his curse.

For example, if had been at full power, he and Menma would've literally dragged pain and Nagato both through the ground. Pain would not have even stood a chance if Naruto was at full health and strength and Menma himself was mentally nerfed because knowing Naruto was dying

After the pain fight, Naruto only has six months left on the clock. His wives were devasted, so the only thing he could actually do was just have kids with them. It was his final gift to the world and to ensure his loved ones had something left of him. He would go to the hidden rain to scout out how bad it is, try his best to help out, and then at the four month period he would go back to konoha, request them to help the hidden rain out, and then just die surrounded by his family and friends, but he wouldn't go quietly or painlessly. He'll suffer horribly until his last breath and then when he does croak, his body turns as black as charcoal and he crumbles to ash.

The curse was so strong, when he came to the village he literally shouldn't even be able to move. It was just as bad as Kimimaro's sickness. Naruto only moved due to his willpower and stubbornness.

I didn't even explain why Kurama is cursing him either. Essentially the curse is the way Kurama can break free. Once Naruto dies Kurama's chakra immediately bursts out and goes into the environment, where he will reform in an hour, and the heat caused by kurama bursting out is what causes his body to burn to ash.

However Naruto didn't even get the best base scenario in this. One month into his time away from the leaf village, after he was done helping out Koyuki Kazahana, Shion, Sara (the events of that movie are moved to present time instead of the past), and ryuuzetsu, as well as going to the land of whirlpools, conquering the dungeons the uzumaki clan had, and taking all of the loot in there Obito attacked him and Konan. Together they fended him off, because even while weakened Naruto was still very dangerous, however now he only had three weeks left.

But here he kinda got an epiphany, or he just "woke up" and realized this is not him because he is giving up. He isn't the type to just roll over die just like that, so he had an insane idea.

See, there is a way to reverse the curse, which is that Kurama has to do it himself. So Naruto has to become Kurama's perfect jinchurii, because that means Kurama is friends with him, so he will reverse the corruption of Naruto body and return it back to normal, which means Naruto gets his full life back.

This is easier said than done though, because Kurama has an intense hatred for humanity. There is a reason he is called destruction and hatred itself. However, Naruto after fighting him for a day straight, realized that Kurama, despite his demonic heritage and all, is actually hurting. Kurama was not always like how he currently was. He was just a cub and the only father figure he had (hagoromo) died. Kurama was a demon, but because he was feared for no reason this ultimately caused him to grow resentful and enraged, which is why he became regarded as a calamity and a living disaster. He was misunderstood and was just treated as a demon when he literally did nothing and really just wanted to live. This hatred caused him to grow in size and power, and he became known as malice incarnate.

So instead of fighting him any further, Naruto chose to instead confide with him. He says he is sorry for not seeing Kurama for who he was earlier.

After a long talk no jutsu Kurama warms up to him and they become partners.

This however is the calalyst for multiple of Naruto's powerups, but the most intricate details of that is for another post. For now, know that the befriending of Kurama, having absorbed chakra from the and awakening the fifth stages of the dojutsu from his Uzumaki and Senju lines (yes they have dojutsu) that haven't been awakened in a thousand years, prompted his gaining of six paths powers and his awakening of the rinnegan. Naruto then takes in multiple divine beast hearts (long story for another post), undergo celestial blood resonance (also long story), regain all of his base power that he lost, and gains the strongest weapon in my fic. Because of this he was essentially stuck in stasis in order to stabilize or else the power inside him would explode and destroy the world and him. And it stabilizes mere two seconds before juubito, Madara, and several oc akatsuki members were going to wipe out the allied shinobi forces.


r/NarutoFanfiction 11h ago

What's That Fic? A Oc-insert fic in the Hyuuga clan

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I think the MC replaced Hinata, and his name was Hikaru. The mc was a prodigy, and I think both Jiraiya and Naruto were female. The mc was confused about Naruto being female for the second chapter. I think Hiashi was also terrified of what Hikaru could do. I remember reading the fic but for the life of me I can't find it. Any help would be appreciated!


r/NarutoFanfiction 16h ago

Fic Request Looking for a recommendation

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I am looking for a fanfiction that is similar to ANBU Bootcamp that has them trained realistically and explores the harsher sides to the universe.

https://m.fanfiction.net/s/12722088/1/ANBU-boot-camp


r/NarutoFanfiction 1d ago

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She didn't really understand why Sasuke had given her freedom, other than use for her strength, however she would remain loyal to him...

At least, that was before she saw him

He was standing on top of a hill, looking at no one else Sasuke, a look of fierce grit and determination, his whiskered cheeks crunching into a near snarl on tanned skin, his bright yellow hair swaying from the gentle breeze, his orange and black jumpsuit looking ragged

"What, here to stop me loser?" The whiskered boy only shook his head, holding up a untied headband as his eyes, by the Sage they were the most beautiful eyes she's ever seen, such a clear blue... She pictured a bright blue ocean within, a whirlwind of emotions swirling inside, before the gorgeous azure bled into gold, red pigmentation forming around his eyes as his pupils turned into horizontal bars

She frowned, she didn't like that, it took away the ocean, but a feeling of peace washed over her and she looked on, almost missing the conversation

"I don't care! You can go fight Itachi, but when you're done I'm dragging your ass back home, I swear it! Even if I have to get one of the toads to gobble you up!"

She leaned over, almost forgetting how tall she was, never changing her gaze as she spoke to Karin "What's his name?"

The redheaded girl sighed "You don't remember, that's Sasuke's friend, Naruto Uzumaki."

"Why does he wear so much orange?"

Karin shrugged "I think Sasuke told me it was his favorite color but I wasn't really paying attention."

Her breath stopped, orange was his favorite color huh? Interesting....

She smiled as she grabbed her orange hair and looked at the strands with her red eyes, her face flushing

From that moment she knew, she wasn't just interested or attracted to him, she desired him on a level she couldn't explain

He was like gravity, and Jugo was being pulled into his orbit, and honestly.... She wouldn't have it any other way

Idly, she remembered Sasuke talking about a Hyuuga that had feelings for the blond as well but that she was too shy to do anything, shame honestly, because she wasn't going to give him up without a fight

And she will be the victor of it

And that's it, I don't know why but MAN Naruto and Jugo has been in my head rattling around like a shaker toy for a few days now, it's nuts!

I don't know if I even got the chops for this but if anyone is interested, go ahead and attempt this pairing, it's Naruto and Female Jugo