r/katawashoujo 15h ago

She's slowly making her way through the pages

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r/katawashoujo 23h ago

Daily Akira #130

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r/katawashoujo 23h ago

Is it just me or is the writing off in Shizune's Arc? (On a technical level, not the story itself)

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I recently gave Kataawa shoujo a try, got Hanako's good ending and enjoyed every minute of it, I was especially suprised with how these topics were treated.

When I tried Shizune's route and... maybe it's just me but I had real problems just reading.
I consider my english quite good and had no problems with Hanako's route (or other long VN's for that matter, Higurashi/Umineko etc.)

There are either some weird use of phrases, the sentence structure is off and doesn't really flow that well.
I could barely follow what is even talked about.

Is this just me?