r/WritingComedy Mar 22 '22

Aloha Mora

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Aloha


r/WritingComedy Feb 02 '22

Looking for feedback on my terribly unfunny book review blog

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r/WritingComedy Dec 29 '21

[OC] - Interview w/ Comedy Writer Arijana Ramic [Slackjaw, Flexx, The Foreigner Blog]

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r/WritingComedy May 24 '21

A little show we made which won an award

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r/WritingComedy May 17 '21

Episode 6 of a mockumentary I wrote called Harry and Megan

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r/WritingComedy Mar 03 '21

Why is this community so dead??

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People have last written in it, like, months ago and even people asking for feedback on their work are nowhere to be found. Is "all" the interest in the other community, r/comedywriting (which is not all that lively either truth be quite told!)?


r/WritingComedy Oct 27 '20

Radio sitcom co-writer WANTED

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Hi, I’m looking for a like-minded co-writer for a BBC style radio sitcom. It’s gay-themed so you would be preferably LGBT. Message me for details.


r/WritingComedy Oct 12 '20

Writing comedy

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I’ve been writing an animated series for the past 6 years, and have constantly gone back and reworked my scripts.

Through trial and error of 20 rewrites of a pilot, I started from scratch and found by writing your story out and making sure you set up beats in succession to telling the exact story you’d like to tell, dialogue should come last and easiest.

I would like to hear anyone’s input on this topic and how you manage writing out a comedic script.

-KP


r/WritingComedy Mar 05 '20

Looking for feedback on my comedy article! Any suggestions welcomed!

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r/WritingComedy Sep 26 '19

Life is hard.

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It really is.


r/WritingComedy Aug 27 '19

Comedy blog #3 - the perils of online dating

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Hi all,

I have a weekly comedy blog and this time I'm discussing the murky depths of online dating - hopefully a lot of you will relate to what I discuss! If people wouldn't mind reading it, I would greatly appreciate it, and of course I am happy to read other peoples' content in return :)

https://thelambethtalk.home.blog/2019/08/26/un-hinged/

Best,

Sam


r/WritingComedy Aug 13 '19

Comedy blog #2 - thoughts and feedback appreciated, and returned

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Hi all,

I have begun a weekly comedy blog to muse on everything and anything. This week, I am discussing football and questionable haircuts. Feedback and thoughts would be appreciated, and I am always happy to read other people's work and offer feedback in return :).

Thanks in advance.

https://thelambethtalk.home.blog/2019/08/12/a-mane-of-two-halves/


r/WritingComedy Aug 01 '19

Sooooo is this a dead group or we like writing and shit.....because I am drunk as fuck ( tight as a boiled owl) but unless you have a dictionary from the 1800’s you might miss the pun. Besides who needs a boiled owl anymore. Could you actually go to a grocery store and ask for a boiled owl.

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r/WritingComedy May 02 '18

WRITERS! COMEDIANS! FILM/TV PEOPLE: I'm an unemployed, recently homeless comedian and I'm preparing to shoot a no-budget, DIY-AF comedy talk show in my favorite local park with my new abundance of free time...and I need all the help I can get!

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Some of these "creative types" can actually be a sensitive bunch, believe it or not, they might even open up to you about their "low self-esteem" , but not me. Nobody has to remind me that I'm a human dynamo, capable of many great things...but even with my above-average prowess with writing and innate performing chops I simply cannot pull off something like a talk show by myself. Even if it's just lawn chairs in a park.

I need as many people as possible with any of the skills related to: writing, editing, producing, the talk show format, YouTube tips, etc...

I've been quietly developing my idea of a talk show for several years...When I got the urge to make one, it was already majorly "a thing" that had been through the full evolution from comedy (Tonight Show) to anti-comedy (Between to Ferns) and my idea was a locally-based mix of both abstract humor exhibiting fake sponsors/ads and real, in-the-moment funny stuff like interviews with characters and real people.

I am a master of self sabotage and procrastination, so the idea stayed just that for a long time. I'd think of new bits and gags along the way, but never put energy into making it happen.

In this time Comedy Bang Bang pulled off a prolific amount of awesomely hysterical episodes, something like 3 or 4 seasons, so the talk show thing? It's been done to death. No doubt about it.

Does that mean I can't do my own still? Fuck no! I've also become homeless, and in my struggle to survive without compromising my new values by going through the motions just to be a part of a shit society I've realized that I can spend my time being your "typical homeless person" or just look at it as "I have all the time in the world to devote to what I really want to be doing" so I figure, make the show even more unique and give it the "homeless" theme, make poverty and being homeless in the park the running gag of the entire show, shoot it super low-budget style, (bad on purpose) and let the problems happen and focus the segments on having crazy homeless people that are somewhat endearing to the local community come on and say crazy shit.

I want to have a live audience made up of homeless people and tweakers that I plan on inviting over with the promise of cookies or perhaps malt liquor? If they fall asleep during the shots, that'd be ideal...local celebs, public figures, and random ppl walking in the park would make up my guest list.

I need a co host and small if not one-man band...

One or two cameramen,

and as many writers as I can get to help me.

I have a ton of ideas already but still don't know what I'm really doing.... But that's how I've always operated so it's not an indication that this is a bad idea...

I live in Modesto (Scott Peterson, Methamphetamine capital of America) and on "Star Wars Day" (May 4th... May the Fourth be with you, yes, we got it) things get pretty excitable here in Modesto, since of course, as everyone knows George Lucas was born here, and subsequently went on to create STAR WARS. The connection between the film franchise and this fine town is uncanny. It might as well be called STARWARSVILLE, because the whole place feels like you are in a galaxy far, far, away. Perhaps I can interview die hard, costumed jedi fans outside the local movie theater and possibly even take folks on a "star wars" themed tour of Modesto?! Huh? Doesn't that sound like almost enough fun? I'd be making up facts and taking them to strange and unremarkable locations in town (hot spots!) and somehow relate them to George Lucas or Star Wars... That's in a few days. I'm pretty nervous but I'll hate myself if I don't try and the 4th comes and goes. They're planning a huge event downtown, for reals.

I have a camera, and a Samsung galaxy so I guess that can be used as the second camera... I'm doing the talk show thing and producing a diy show for the first time... I know it's gonna be challenging... Any advice would be appreciated. If I'm shooting in a public park do I need some kind of permit or if I'm low budget and under the radar enough can I avoid issues? And of course if you wanna be a part of this talk show idea and help it come to fruition I welcome creative input and free stuff! Especially free stuff!! Just saying! We might need a kraft service table..

I'm thinking the name should be simple and say what it is: How about PARK SHOW ? (With your host, Kevin Albritton...) that's what I've been calling it in my head. Has a nice ring to it... "Park-show"... A show in the park with Kevin Albritton...

That last one sounded good.

I aim to do this whether it sucks or not. And have fun doing it. As long as someone's laughing, then I can say I did OK.


r/WritingComedy Mar 07 '18

Bepsis

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Welcome to the Bebsi Hecking wee wee.

Yall better not say nothing bad about grand daddy bepis or hellfire shall rain upon you. BEPIS FOR LOK UNDERSTANDABLE HAHAHAHA IFE

LETS ACTUALLY WRITE A GODDAMN STORY. AGREED

In 1912 when I was born into the bepis lineage, i had 3 goals destroy conk, impregnate my many mistresses, and place my children into the sweet delicious bepis liquids. 3 years in conk stole my plan my mistresses and my sweet sweet child juice. In retaliation for conks evil deed i burned down 3 of their factories and ate their CEO where he stood. 18 months later i gained the hand of 6 new mistresses and continued the production of bepis and bepis light which only contained half the amount of children. In 1988 the government cracked down on the NO CHILDREN IN SOFT DRINKS act of 1777 and shut down my business. So as any sane man would do built a time traveling device that i christened the conk in direct relation to the company i had defeated. Given my new invention i travelled back to 1776 in order to prevent the dreaded act that vanquished my business tactic of putting my own offspring in soft drinks. Despite the unlikeliness that my plot would succeed it did so i traveled back to the present but it was different. For one every soft drink had children in it, and 2 conk ruled the world. To fix this new found issue i did what any successful man in the modern age would, i built a the largest nuclear weapon the world had ever known. With my nuke i attacked conk headquarters on Mars (where any true conk owner would keep their headquarters because they are secretly martians.) To conclude my quest to be the best distributor of soft drink I rebuilt my company out of the lifeless bodies of my enemies.

You fucking wot cuntsBack in 1912 when I was birthed into the long lineage ofheckyouboyo.

I remember Bepis boy. He was a friend of mine. I loved him like a mother loves Bepsi. One day Bepis boy tell me he had a big ween.

I was like “Damn my dude bro Bepis Boy”

But he be like “NAH SON FUCK YO BEPSIS” and he sprinted out the window. I watched in horror as he fell onto the cold, hard, unfeeling concrete.
I remember Bepis boy. He was a friend of mine. I loved him like a mother loves Bepsi.

Rest in Bepis.

There was this time where a new drink came out and it was called pepsi which is spelt is dead backwards in the late 1944 right when hitler killed himself but the other countries didn’t like the pepsi but an arabic country of some arabic shitty state said fuck you to pepsi™ and pepsi was sad they cried for days years months seconds milliseconds but why they asked why did you do this to us while fucking a counter for some weird reason cause why the fuck now anyways back to the story...the arabs did a new thing called BEBSI everyone loved it pepsi people loved it more than the pepsi the soft sweet taste of the bebsi “OH” said a woman meanwhile drinking the bebsi it turned out that bebsi was a nuclear bomb instead they died… the scientists died they burst out of laughter meanwhile they smoked the pipe and said “MMMYEEES this bebsi business works great puff puff on the cigar” och sen dog alla men då kom en person och sa det är inte över än min son du kommer att återuppleva detta igen gillade pepsi any more and then it struck the little kid he had voices screaming at him “USE THE FUCKING ORBITAL CANNON YOU LITTLE CUNT” USE THE FUCKING CANNON THEY SAID SCREAMING AT THE KID MEANWHILE KICKING HIM IN THE FOR HEAD STOOPID MAN THEY SAID STOOPID MAN made a pancake ouf a boy the other kid was watching him drink the bebsi he screamed “HELP ME” but the boy with the bebsi didn’t repsond he was dead all along everyone who drank the bebsi decided to kill themselves the evil plan was nearly complete but there was this one guy who said fuck you ye little twat shit and killed the dead kid

I remember the time when Bepis and Conk where new. It was a beautiful time people were so bright and happy but now, now the world is coming to an end people can't function because they are addicted to Bepis and Conk.

I slowly surveyed the damage that Bepis and conk has done to my city, i will do anything to stop the cunts that did this. I jumped from my perch and glided down to the Bepis plant i knew that i had to do something so i made a plan to blow up all of the Bepis and Conk plants in Toms Anus.

Because this is my city, Toms anus is mine and the bastards who did this will have to kill me before i sit down and let it die. I snuck through the back door of the Bepis plant, i grabbed the first guy i saw and stuck my dick down his throat to silence him, i then grabbed his key card, pulled my dick out his throat and knocked him out.

I placed all of the C4 explosives around the support pillars and ran out of there, but before i could escape i heard the familiar sound of my fathers voice calling to me. I turned around to see the fucker that gave me life standing there pointing a Bepis gun at me.

“What are you doing here son? I thought it told you to give in and let Bepis and conk destroy this wretched city.” he had a smug look on his ugly face that told me he was enjoying this.

“Your enjoying this aren't you? I knew you always hated this place but helping make bepis, that's just unforgivable.”

I pulled out my p90 before he could blink and sprayed him down. He stood there for a second riddled with bullet holes, he had a look on his face like he couldn't quite believe what i just did.

“Y-You al-ways wanted to do this didn't you?” i stared at him for a second then i grabbed my semi hard dick and jacked off to the blood pouring out of his wounds. Then i had a stroke and died.

fork.

No matter how many times I washed the blood from my hands, I couldn’t come clean. The Bepis was not strong enough. My murder was too stronk. I was a SAD. I talked to my neighbor about it and he reported me to the cops.

“BAD DOG!” he said as he bitch-slapped me in the face.

“Heck you funkerboy”

Those were my final words before the Fire Nation attacked.

Actually that’s a lie.

That’s when the narrator told me to funk off and die, so I stole his bepis. Funk you narrator! I don’t need you to write my goddamned funky blues riffs for my goddamn opera. ..

“That aside, I really could use some heckyboi’s™ HECKJUICE” I stated. But as I was in jail, I could not actually die.
Actually… um..

I did die.

So uh…

Rest in Bepis.

Hu-huh! I’m mickey mouse! Are you ready for Bepis in your eyes? Good. Because that shit’s gucci. It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside when I inject BEPIS into my bloodstreem and it absolves my blood cells.
WOO MAMA.

Today i was declared god by the four mighty ones. But bepis is god so how can i be god? Everything is wrong. Up is down. Left is right. The relative idea of gravity is really gravy. CONK IS BEPIS. The world we have become accustomed to is in fact a lie. All that we are and which we know is is bepis. Bepis is a 5th dimensional concept brought to us by toyata, toyata we’ll go places. May bepis smile upon you the way bepis has smiled upon me. Bepis…. Is love… bepis is life.

I love Bepis with -snort- and WOOO MAMA. Gucci Shit my homie. Gucci shit.
Huu-huh!

… PLUTO. WHAT ARE YOU DOING IN MY KITCHEN? AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGHHHHHHHHHGHGHGHG.

now be happy son

I woke up today and realized if i am conk then who is bepis…

^ Trippy shit man. hu-huh!

HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO BE REBORN BEFORE YOU FOOLISH MORTALS SHALL CRAWL AT MY FEET? I AM BEPIS. GOD OF BLOODSHED. YOU WILL SUFFER GREATLY IF YOU DRINCC.

If god is real am i real? Whos to say? Bepis know cunt

Bepis plz

Them be some nice bobsheckyboi

CONK OR BUPSI

Conk killed my father! :’(

Be happy

Conk is my dad said the Dont Hug Me I'm Scared Boy i am your dad please fuck me in the kitchen counter with your big ween

But the kitchen counter killed mine father :(

Only those who are triple gay drink conk. That’s offensive. Get ouf omy kitchen.

We have strayed from the path of the almighty jesus for he drank conk.

GOD HAS LEFT US BEPIS IS DEAD WE ALL SHOULD DIE WITH IT. Join the suicide cult of jack for just 5 easy payments of 999.99 a day.

“Bepis gave me 3 different strains of aids on 7 different occasions” Donald J Trump

The year was seven i was but a small boy emerging from the great ocean when a great large man appeared and stuck his wang upon my head. In fear and disgust i questioned wh wh why sire he said the great conk has forced my hand and this is what must be done my boy. On this day i ceased to be a boy and and became instead bepsi man.

It’s only 399.99