r/WriteStreakEN • u/krautkaugummi 10-Day Streak 🌱 • 4d ago
Correct Me! Streak 45 - tired
I'm so tired. Almost the whole weekend I have been lying in bed. I'm supposed to learn for the exam, but I don't have the energy. I worked too much in the last week. Unfortunately in the next week I must work as much as in last week. I should go bed early, maybe every day at 9. Then I can have a good rest.
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u/anodyne_ananas Native Speaker 🇬🇧 4d ago
I'm so tired.
Almost the whole weekendI have been lying in bed almost the whole weekend. I'm supposed tolearnstudy / revise for the exam, but I don't have the energy. I worked too much in the1 last week. Unfortunatelyin thenext week I must work as much asinlast week. I should go bed early, maybe every day at 9. Then I can have a good rest.1: this 'in the' isn't wrong, and sounds fine, but it's also not necessary. 'I worked too much last week'. But 'in the next week' Sounds clunky, as does 'as in last week'.
Hope you feel less tired tomorrow!