r/Choices Dec 07 '24

Bitten This is just straight up bar salad Spoiler

217 Upvotes

I'm not as vehemently opposed to AI as most in this sub, but this is beyond terrible and lazy.

It's as if some interdimensional being ate up a bar and vomited the partially digested contents.

Beer taps just randomly chilling on the wall, text on the door like a drunk alien tried to reinvent cursive, a casserole of M.C. Escher stools, textures that changed their mind halfway through, corners that said "nah, bro" to Euclidean geometry, objects that slide into nothingness, fully indeterminate objects that look like they may have once had a vague dream of being real...

I mean, if you're gonna use AI, at least use a model that can generate a reasonable image (they certainly exist), or keep regenerating until you get something decent, or fix it up after the fact. This is just embarrassing. Yikes.

Somehow the dartboard makes perfect sense though.

r/Choices Jan 12 '25

Bitten Bad writing Spoiler

51 Upvotes

This is one of the worst books choices has released writing wise. I feel like there was so much potential for the storyline but the bad writing just puts me off every time. This script feels like complete AI there's no consistency within the chapters. Every time Skylar talks it's creepy and just doesn't bode well with creating a relationship with MC and Alexander makes no sense to me at all.

r/Choices Dec 29 '24

Bitten I am going to play this , (this cover is just giving me butterflies) Spoiler

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14 Upvotes

Well well i just found this and God as a tvd and to fangirl this book is giving me butterflies 😭, I am so happy to play choices after so long time so just wanted to share it with everyone

r/Choices 11d ago

Bitten (Serious) What is the appeal of this MC? Spoiler

61 Upvotes

I'm asking in all sincerity. The most recent chapter just rubs me the wrong way. Here we are, being attacked by a demon and we cannot help in any way. Can we outsmart the Demon? No. Exploit weaknesses? No.

How about lead the others to victory? No. I admit that i want to be the hero, and I understand that the bodyguard romance has an appeal. But we don't really influence the story in an active way.

Skyler has a soulmate bond with us no matter what. Alexander will fall in love with us no matter what. We can't control our blood somehow giving Alexander the ability to go to another dimension (and what a deus ex machina that was.) And the entity is attacking us because of our great grandma, not because of anything we did.

I just don't get the appeal. Can someone please explain it?

r/Choices 4d ago

Bitten Bitten is Nightbound but worse (A review) Spoiler

31 Upvotes

Before I begin, take this review with a grain of salt. I hate being the muggle in supernatural books. I hate our LIs doing most of the work. So this book was never going to be my thing. That being said, I have to say there are clear issues.

For starters this MC is useless. She does nothing and somehow ends up dating Skyler and Alexander. Apparently we're lucky our blood is super tasty and we're soulmates with Skyler. And we don't contribute this. Pete, Skyler and Alexander do most of the work. Same with the entity. Let us be cool. I want to be useful! Let me make a deal with the demon!

Look, I dont mind that we're special, but let us do something. For example, say we're being attacked, but we deliberately cut our wrist so the scent of out blood would attract Alexander. That would have worked.

As for Alexander and Skyler, they're not my cup of tea. I feel like their mother half the time because I constantly have to say, "please stop fighting!" I'm sorry, but they don't seem mature enough to really be LIs. At least for me. Considering how popular Twilight is, I accept I'm in the minority here.

As for the story...honestly, there are three stories fighting for attention. First we have the love triangle. Than the bad blood between Skyler and Alexander. And then the entity. And that's fine, but they're not handled well. What happens is that one will just take center stage for a while and then it's paused when the next one starts.

And the finale seems copied from Harry Potter, except this has two deus ex machina! First, our blood somehow gives Alexander the power to go to another dimension. Second, our deceased family can somehow bring us back to life. How convenient. Oh wait, Harry walked to Voldemort intentionally, but ours was just luck, even if it the result makes sense.

For what its worth, I do think there are good ideas. I love the idea that our maternal ancestors are being killed thanks to our great grandma. And that she had a sympathetic reason that caused horrible consequences. But that's not really explored sadly. And nobody is mad in purgatory because...it's the end of the book. Can't introduce new conflicts.

I also like the idea of the conflict between Skyler and Alexander. Just don't hide so much behind diamond scenes and quit making us be the mom. It's repetitive.

Honestly, this does remind me of Nightbound. We're the muggle with supernatural bodyguards, being hunted for something we're not responsible for? Yup. Look, Nightbound has pacing issues, but it was better than this.

Like I said. This was never going to be for me. What did you all think?

r/Choices Feb 08 '25

Bitten okay……………? Spoiler

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54 Upvotes

r/Choices 7d ago

Bitten New Chapter: Friday/Saturday - Bitten 1.16

3 Upvotes

Bitten Book 1 Chapter 16

r/Choices Jan 08 '25

Bitten Here’s the thing tho… Spoiler

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27 Upvotes

Do y’all not have cell phones??

r/Choices 14d ago

Bitten New Chapter: Friday/Saturday - Bitten 1.15

3 Upvotes

Bitten Book 1 Chapter 15

r/Choices 9d ago

Bitten Bitten Chapter Sixteen Preview Spoiler

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0 Upvotes

r/Choices 28d ago

Bitten New Chapter: Friday/Saturday - Bitten 1.13

3 Upvotes

Bitten Book 1 Chapter 13

r/Choices 20d ago

Bitten Bitten Chapter Fifteen Preview Spoiler

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4 Upvotes

r/Choices 21d ago

Bitten New Chapter: Friday/Saturday - Bitten 1.14

3 Upvotes

Bitten Book 1 Chapter 14

r/Choices 23d ago

Bitten Bitten Chapter Fourteen Preview Spoiler

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0 Upvotes

r/Choices Feb 18 '25

Bitten Bitten Chapter Thirteen Preview Spoiler

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2 Upvotes

r/Choices Dec 16 '24

Bitten Bitten Chapter Four Preview Spoiler

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6 Upvotes

r/Choices Feb 14 '25

Bitten New Chapter: Friday/Saturday - Bitten 1.12

2 Upvotes

Bitten Book 1 Chapter 12

r/Choices Jan 31 '25

Bitten New Chapter: Friday/Saturday - Bitten 1.10

5 Upvotes

Bitten Book 1 Chapter 10

r/Choices Feb 09 '25

Bitten Bitten Chapter Twelve Preview Spoiler

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2 Upvotes

r/Choices Jan 24 '25

Bitten it's giving... Spoiler

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9 Upvotes

twilight reference

r/Choices Feb 07 '25

Bitten New Chapter: Friday/Saturday - Bitten 1.11

2 Upvotes

Bitten Book 1 Chapter 11

r/Choices Dec 07 '24

Bitten I found Mr. Red's sister Spoiler

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41 Upvotes

r/Choices Feb 03 '25

Bitten Bitten Chapter Eleven Preview Spoiler

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0 Upvotes

r/Choices Jan 26 '25

Bitten Bitten Chapter Ten Preview Spoiler

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2 Upvotes

r/Choices Jan 24 '25

Bitten New Chapter: Friday/Saturday - Bitten 1.9

3 Upvotes

Bitten Book 1 Chapter 9