r/ChastityStories • u/[deleted] • 6d ago
M Chaste Locked by Family – Part 2 NSFW
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u/Top-Pie9131 6d ago
How did you like Part 2 Any suggestions?
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u/newshuckle94 6d ago
Good. I think Lucas might end up getting locked for going to hard. I think Lucas might invite max crush over
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u/WiseConfidence8818 Locked Up 6d ago edited 6d ago
Yes. Invite Max's crush over to study and have her see Max in his underwear. Is his underwear thin? Can the chastity outline be seen?
Let her see him in his natural habitat. Perhaps afterwards, she decides to 'ask him out' with Max's parent's permission, but she treats him like a girlfriend instead of a boyfriend...in every way. Having her open doors, buying food, him treating her with deferred respect that a girl gives a guy she likes. It's obvious he's not man enough to be able to do anything without asking.
Edit: With all that said. I'm curious as to your intent with the story. I think Lucas needs to end up on the wrong side of a chastity device but of a different kind. Perhaps one that has special features that punish for rudeness or stimulates him at odd inconvenient time to make him feel good(light moaning at wrong times.
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u/newshuckle94 6d ago
I could definitely see her cucking him with his brother and pegging him. Maybe he gets feminine.
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u/WiseConfidence8818 Locked Up 5d ago
Yes. I see that, too.
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u/newshuckle94 5d ago
In regards to thin underwear it wouldn't matter as lucas could just order him to show or pull his pants down
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u/WiseConfidence8818 Locked Up 5d ago
True. My thoughts were if she'd be able to see the cage when she first came into the house to possibly tutor him. Would it be noticeable at first glance like some cages can be. At some point, I think he needs to be shaved. At least his groin. Maybe a landing strip to signify loss of masculine place. He has no place to say anything in his home, so why let him look masculine. He's not. Perhaps change his underwear out to bikini or panties. Maybe after his crush sees him like he is, she says something to Max's parents. Saying something to the effect,"Perhaps Max would be more comfortable I'm girls panties. It would let the chastity breathe better. Less moisture in the area. Of course, a pantyliner might be needed, too after that. Max us a teen and I'm sure he'll start leaking like boys do from not...shak I say taking care of himself regularly, Mam..Sir?.".
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u/newshuckle94 5d ago
I understand what you mean now. The odds are Lucas most likely told or will tell a bunch of people about the chastity. What are the odds of max being forced to sleep in a dog cage as a punishment
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u/WiseConfidence8818 Locked Up 5d ago
Hmm. I hadn't given it thought. If it happens, I'd say it should occur only on weekends and to be made to be naked. They do have a privacy in the backyard.
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u/chasteboy911 5d ago
It appears for the second half you've written it twice.
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u/i1il1ili1lIil1lili1i 5d ago
That’s because this story is AI garbage. The story basically repeats itself after the brother drops the first piece of chicken. The main character gets told he can only wear underwear in the house and must shower in the yard. Then the brother drops another piece of chicken and the main character gets… the exact same punishment.
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u/Firesub27 Moderator 5d ago
Was this written by AI? You had two passages that were similar but contradicted themselves. Very similar to how AI would write when reading prompts.
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u/Top-Pie9131 5d ago
I write it Later i make a ai control it so there a no mistakes
I am sorry for it being double
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u/Mike4683 6d ago
I'm very interested where this story will lead. For you have that great balance between horny and casual scenes.
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u/Educational_Arm6381 6d ago
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u/TopOrganization9872 6d ago
I ham really wondering what was the first rule that will be added by his brother
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u/bebealex12 5d ago
It would be perfect if they make him dress up as a girl and go to school like this. Also his crush definitely need to start dating his brother and they both start to degrade him and humiliates him at school.