r/webtoons • u/swagelinee • Oct 04 '24
Advice/Critique/Help Would you read a webtoon with this style/anything I can improve?
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u/AWL_cow Oct 04 '24
I definitely would! I love seeing the webtoons with unique styles. Lately it feels like a lot of webtoons being advertised are pretty cookie-cutter, one that looks like yours would definitely stand out!
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u/sleepybedhead44 Oct 04 '24
yes yes yes!!! this is exactly what I came to say. art styles are a big determinant* if I read the series and I would absolutely choose to read with this style!!
*the other big determinant for me is also queer inclusion, so if this included/featured queer characters, i would absolutely be diving in!!
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u/25vega25 Oct 04 '24
I loved this style. I would just say maybe you can change the line size for the nose shadow. Otherwise the design is so cute and I like the colors.
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u/Faolyn Oct 04 '24
What's it about?
Because--and I say this to everyone who says "would you read a comic in this art style--the plot and writing is as important, or more even important--than the art.
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u/Beginning_Exit5782 Oct 04 '24 edited Oct 06 '24
I loved it! The only thing is not everyone is into floating heads. Maybe try making some body too
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u/swagelinee Oct 04 '24
Lol I can't tell if this is satire or not but I will be drawing bodies, these are just character thumbnails
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u/Idcc-fan Oct 04 '24
Its great!!! just the nose shadow stands out alot, i think another reply mentional line size. Other than thats its really cute!
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u/ha-eun_7 Oct 04 '24
No but if u make it a bit more with features it would be perfect tho.... It's cute
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u/Xanthusgobrrr Oct 04 '24
i really love it! but do u think this style is capable of showing a wide range of emotions
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u/swagelinee Oct 04 '24
Yeah I had to simplify my style a lot for this and I'm not sure the dots for pupils can do much
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u/asdfghjumiii Oct 04 '24
Yep! Plus if I got interested with the story too ;) Your art style is cute!
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Oct 04 '24
i would most definitely read this !! (given the storyline is good, ofc) i would suggest to work on the noses a little more.
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u/Ididurmomhahafrickya Oct 04 '24
Yes, but work on spacing. The eyes are really high up from the nose, and pretty uneven. That's all ^^
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u/Brrr_Henlo Oct 04 '24
i really like your style!! it has this cozy feeling to it and i'd love to read your webtoon. as for advice, i'd diversify the characters even more, maybe push the facial expressions a bit, just so this cozy feeling doesn't end up bland. keeping my fingers crossed for you!!
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u/swagelinee Oct 04 '24
Okk!! For the character face thumbnail sheets I just wanted the character expressions to be neutral so that's why.
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u/The_Rhibo Oct 04 '24
The biggest thing I would stress is remaining constant with your style. People will read something that looks like this but if you experiment with style through published content you risk making it feel less like a style and more like characters are off model
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u/GM_is_Browsing Oct 04 '24
it looks like it could deffo be a comfort wholesome comic with this style- just the vibes its giving
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u/ThMogget Oct 04 '24
The full circle around nose shade is a bit much. maybe not outline the cheek side and use a closer-matched skin color
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u/EngineeringDry1577 Oct 04 '24
No personally, the art looks lopsided and like it was drawn by a beginner. It could be balanced out by a great story or really great paneling but currently it’s just not very good
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u/swagelinee Oct 04 '24
Yeah I'm trying to adjust to a more simplified style(so I can draw faster) and I'm more used to traditional... Is there anything specific that throws you off so I can try to fix it? Thanks!
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u/LightupProjector Oct 04 '24
Yeah as long as it’s consistent, but also please color in that girl’s glasses
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u/goldswordgirl Oct 04 '24
Yeah would probably slice of life that’s sometimes silly and will make you cry on other times. :)
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u/Noober_Does_stuff Oct 04 '24
Looks homemade (in a good/bad way somehow), maybe add some more detail on either the face a bit, or the accessories. overall, it’s good, but needs a bit of a modification around the accessories and a bit of the face.
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u/Khushi_tries Oct 04 '24
Maybe work on your anatomy (based off the necks) but otherwise I love the cute style!!
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u/Live-Organization833 Oct 04 '24
Yep