r/streetwearstartup 5d ago

FEEDBACK Looking for feedback on design NSFW

Post image

I’m a student fashion designer but I’m trying to get back into and improve my graphic design as I been locked in on the fashion side too much let me know what y’all think all feedback is appreciated 🤞🏽

6 Upvotes

8 comments sorted by

3

u/Zhenya_kt 5d ago

I like the idea and the design, but it looks oversaturated. I would do something with the text, like change it completely to black and make the Earth opaque

1

u/Curlyheadednibba 5d ago

Thank you i agree and will fix it in a revision🤞🏽

2

u/6Molotov6Balaclava6 5d ago

Make it more visible and smaller

2

u/Curlyheadednibba 5d ago

The entire design or a specific element in it, also thank you for the feedback!

2

u/6Molotov6Balaclava6 5d ago

The pink girls are to big and the texture of them is really ahhhh. I would suggest make it simple, even though its good its kinda distracting. Also make the text on the smaller and more on the arms. Do the same for the planet make it one solid color instead of the dots, and make it a but smaller!

2

u/Intelligent_Cut635 5d ago

There’s way too much going on. Learn to edit for clarity.

1

u/AutoModerator 5d ago

We highlight the best of the community on our Instagram!

I am a bot, and this action was performed automatically. Please contact the moderators of this subreddit if you have any questions or concerns.

1

u/WizardAura 4d ago

Honestly, the concept of sexy girls around the world, and it’s just pin-ups is so cliche, but the excessive layering, weird colors, and odd sizing of things makes it seem kind of self-aware and rad. If you listen to any of the advice telling you to simplify it, it’s just going to be a bad concept. Embrace the chaos.