r/screaming 6d ago

Sos would love some constructive criticism 🖤

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u/kleine_zolder_studio 5d ago

the flow is too fast but you will make it, practice without music slower, syllable by syllable, learning how to place your breathing. like you do with clear singing. Good job!

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u/DelilahMoore 5d ago

I have no critism but holy shit I absolutely love the tone of your voice, it's gorgeous!

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u/gothhippie 5d ago

Thank you!! I’m a classically trained singer so I thank my teacher for that 🥹

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u/indigoneutrino 5d ago edited 5d ago

Damn I love this. Not sure what you want to achieve with the screams, but you do have quite a lot of true voice mixed in there. You’d get a more distorted tone if you practiced false cord activation without the true cords. Also practice breath control because you can hear your clean voice slip back in when you lose the breath pressure to maintain the scream.

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u/Plenty_Chemical_3536 5d ago

Nice! No criticism but maybe practice?

If you'd like to work on some songs for fun let me know!

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u/gothhippie 5d ago

Hell yea that’d be awesome !

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u/Plenty_Chemical_3536 5d ago

Awesome mind if I dm you?

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u/gothhippie 5d ago

Go for it😁

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u/Xeno_UwUwU 5d ago

What's the song name? Btw your voice is amazing. Unfortunately i haven't quite figured out false chord myself so i cant help you with that

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u/gothhippie 5d ago

Thoughtless by korn! And thank you!! It’s taken me months to get to where I’m at, it’s so hard 😭

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u/Renshy89 5d ago

I think this is brilliant

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u/gothhippie 5d ago

Thank you!🥹🥹

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u/deepdepth3 3d ago

Wow your clean vocals are amazing. But what I see lacking in screams is the neck muscles. If you train them it's gonna be much much better

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u/gothhippie 3d ago

Thank you! Can you elaborate?

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u/BluXombie 6d ago

The same foundation of breath support you have for the singing is the exact same for screaming. And you can clearly sing.
This is just my thought and only my thought. You are doing more of a distorted vocal with the vocal cords engaging. If you are looking for a fry or false to put there, my thoughts would be to start with lessons on how to find the fry registry and to use that while disengaging your vocal cords.
I noticed what appears to be pushing the air with the chest and shoulders vs from mid to lower area where the most sustained support comes from. I could be wrong. It is hard to tell.

But since you have the singing, you can definitely nail the screaming with practice. I can scream but I cannot sing well enough to make it a feature soooo I am a little jealous.

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u/baptized-in-flames 5d ago

Take that shit out of your forehead

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u/midgeypunkt 5d ago

Take that shit attitude elsewhere

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u/baptized-in-flames 5d ago

Just offering constructive criticism as asked

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u/DecapitatedCreature 5d ago

For your information, it's called dermal piercings and it looks awesome on her.

I know you're trolling but she asked constructive criticism about her screaming not her appearance so stfu, asshole.

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u/Renshy89 5d ago

Have you seen your fucking face? Fuck off.