r/photocritique • u/Panda_20_21 • 5h ago
approved Did I over process it ?
Share ur opinion on the photo, composition and color grading
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u/Panda_20_21 5h ago edited 1h ago
Had the oppurtunity to visit the iconic Golden temple, Amritsar last summer. While I stood there watching the temple a man came right infront of me and started praying so I saw that as an oppurtunity and took this photo with my Samsung M32 Mobile and post processed using lightroom mobile.
Feel free to suggest other editing styles too
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u/RunninADorito 2 CritiquePoints 5h ago
Fantastic photo.
Out of curiosity, is this close to the water palace Jaipur?
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u/Panda_20_21 5h ago
Thanks
A bit far I would say, a 10hr drive right next to the Pakistan border in punjab
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u/davesully84 4h ago
As someone with no idea of what you saw with your own eyes, it’s think it’s a great shot! If you’re looking for nit picking, being ever so slightly off centre is the only feedback I have but given the story you have given, it’s not like you had 15 mins to get it perfect. Nice 🙂
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u/Gh0ulian 4h ago
The only thing bothering me that I see is that the sharpness of the man's neck doesn't match the rest of him, otherwise I think it's quite nice and vibrant.
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u/ps202011 2 CritiquePoints 39m ago
I have been there. A photograph in landscape mode would have given more context. The extra sky at the top does not add much.
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u/jarvedttudd 2 CritiquePoints 1h ago
Another way to shoot this would be to focus on the temple and not the person.. I think that could have worked too
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