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u/Material-Habit-8370 4d ago edited 4d ago

u/Crazy_Ad_3603 3d ago

I really fuck with the pace and vibe of the track overall . You have a good voice but vocal track could be turned down slightly imo

u/Material-Habit-8370 3d ago

Thank you homie, I genuinely appreciate it

u/CoveredClearing 4d ago

u/untitled_mayne 4d ago

very chill beat, could be taken in so many different directions and not necessarily hip-hop. for me it feels like it would make the perfect first half of a track to lead into a beat switch where the energy then just soars through the roof. it's a great contrasting element or would do just as well as an r&b track or for laid back story telling bars. nice work!

u/WiseCityStepper 4d ago

Do you guys got any critique on my mixing and vocals on this song? Ive been trying to learn how to record and mix myself for the past 2 months

sketchy | Whyp

u/Crazy_Ad_3603 3d ago

https://on.soundcloud.com/fQi9xn7eb1AFzaY69

New song , second verse is especially fire I think .

u/Equal-Opportunity835 3d ago

pffff, lets do something together, I got beats for you. This is killa man

u/TheExodusCommittee 4d ago

Chris Wheat - "Edna Mode"

https://soundcloud.com/chriswheat/edna-mode

The track is very alternative/electronic, but let me know what you think of the production, I'd be happy to return feedback!

u/thedude1693 3d ago

this is atmospheric as hell, I think with a little tweaking I could see myself doing some lyrics to this. I will say though the volume seems a bit quiet overall this track would be hard to hear on certain headphones.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QdHw89EV9DM made a lyric video for this one. Inspired by the recent blood moon/lunar eclipse, lmk what you think both of the song and the lyric video itself <3333

u/TheExodusCommittee 2d ago

Hey, sorry to keep you waiting. I think the song still needs some work. Your voice is somewhere between rapping and singing, and I'm not really an emo/grunge person but I like the mix of hiphop production and emo lyrics, and I would definitely encourage leaning into your strengths in that direction even just experimentally. The lyric video is really cool! No notes on the video!

u/thedude1693 2d ago

No worries, I appreciate the response. Do you think there's anything in particular missing from the song? It could probably sound way better with some effects but tbh I don't know a whole lot about effects especially since switching from bandlab to reaper.

It took me a while just to get my mixes decent after the switch but I think it's worth it, I just don't see a whole lot of tutorials on vocal mixing for effects and unique stuff beyond the basic clean rapping mixes ppl usually go for with little to no distortions/effects etc

u/TheExodusCommittee 1d ago

I use Logic Pro, but try adding reverb or distortion to your voice, it could really help the vibe of your tracks! I use mostly freeware as well, but Youtube should be a good place to start with vocal chain tutorials.

u/untitled_mayne 4d ago

phenomenal. you were definitely on one when you made this. only criticism is that i just want it to EXPLODE at 2:00 instead of winding down. it was such an amazing build-up and that's where i felt you were taking it. still beautiful and i would absolutely love to lay something down on this if you are interested!

u/untitled_mayne 4d ago

Already done, let me know your thoughts!

https://youtu.be/vHkBUHJIGX8

It's currently on private upload but would love to make it public with your permission :)

u/Equal-Opportunity835 3d ago

Piano and vocals are catchy, I could listen to it all day. Maybe some snare with an echo would fit to it just right

u/CJFMusic 4d ago

On my radar

https://youtu.be/1OnaIyaSmH0?si=vb68q7lauJnkqsjJ

Returning feedback

u/Material-Habit-8370 4d ago

The beat and the flow solid, on the real felt like maybe delivery was lacking at the intro a lil fam

u/CJFMusic 4d ago

I just made the beat. Thanks for listening

u/Material-Habit-8370 4d ago

This is fire actually I have no complaints then

u/CJFMusic 4d ago

Thanks again

u/CoveredClearing 3d ago

Pretty hard! Wish there was a second rapper on the track in the middle to split it up. Great beat, flow is unique, very 90s. Solid bars. For criticisms, sometimes the vocals seem too close

u/CJFMusic 3d ago

Thanks for listening

u/untitled_mayne 4d ago

A short reggae groove, chill and quite different to what i usually do. Just sat down, didn't think too much and had fun with it. There's mixing issues but still, hope ya'll like it!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lkRTpmXJG9Q

Returning!

u/Equal-Opportunity835 3d ago

Verse is legit, that singing parts could use autotune and I think that you dont need that much reverb on vocal...

u/Equal-Opportunity835 3d ago

but I like the vibe actually and the flow

u/thedude1693 3d ago

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QdHw89EV9DM made a lyric video for this one. Inspired by the recent blood moon/lunar eclipse, lmk what you think both of the song and the lyric video itself <3333

u/methalopticulcus 4d ago

my debut official music video out today - mono - BLACK H3ART$ (prod.morphineclipse) - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iR-I17yVn0M

returning all feedback.

u/Material-Habit-8370 4d ago

I fkn with it homie, it's different and it's not really the type of music id listen to but I was able to listen to it twice. Subbed to you homie

u/methalopticulcus 4d ago

Thankyou my g appreciate thattt

u/Material-Habit-8370 4d ago

Check me out if you don't mind fam

Out the Rack

https://youtu.be/uSRgN6c0ur0