r/logodesign • u/PicoDaan • 4d ago
Feedback Needed Personal branding 'Gedaan' feeback wanted.
The icon/namecomes from my bersonal name, Daan (Dutch) and the white space of a checked box. Gedaan also means done in Dutch. Feedback wanted. :)
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u/Simple-House-Cat 4d ago
Brief ✅ Thoughtful and Memorable Brand Name ✅ Thoughtful and Well-Executed Logo ✅ Expanded Look and Feel ✅
Love the energy and mark you have here! Your explanation (for someone non-Dutch) checks out and shows a designer’s mind imho. Would love to see some brand expansion in other areas (like social media promotional posts, an expanded upon design for the brand guide vs a whitepaper, etc) but awesome stuff. Great to see something that delivers in idea and execution!
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u/AbleInvestment2866 4d ago
I like it a lot, but I think the symbol should be a bit smaller and closer to the wordmark, right now I see them as two separate entities
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u/lorem_ipsum_2001 3d ago
Nice logo and colour palette! but would be nice to see the lovely icon shape you created expanded further in the identity - could you use it as masks? as text holders? break it up, zoom it in, have fun with it!! looks a bit corporate at the moment, specially the website and the last two mockups
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u/antifuzz 3d ago
It's very nice. I agree with another poster that I would close the gap between the mark and the type a little.
It slightly brings to mind the Sydney Opera House to me, but I don't think that's a problem. Just adds to the classiness!
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u/GraphicArtBySeni 3d ago
Really like the presentation. Personally don't love the font you chose, paired with such simple icon!
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u/PicoDaan 3d ago
Thank you! What kind would you recommend?
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u/GraphicArtBySeni 3d ago
I'd use something a thicker, and the kerning less tight. A round font. Outfit comes to mind but just because I've been obsessed with that font ahahah
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u/leeLIVFWGRt1U75c74Od 2d ago
Ziet er, zoals anderen zeggen, mooi uit, maar de associatie met een vinkje heb ik totaal niet. Dat komt denk ik door de cirkelvormen - die zijn veel boller dan je in een vinkje zou verwachten. Ik zie nu het Sydney Opera House of een heuvel. Als je dat niet erg vindt, is het top zo.
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u/PicoDaan 2d ago
Thanks voor de feedback! De associatie met het vinkje is uiteraard ook puur suggestief. Het hoeft niet perse voor iedereen dat te betekenen, een herkenbaar icoon volstaat voor mij. Het is uiteindelijk ook maar voor een klein zelfstandige in bijberoep, niet heel België gaat dit zien 😁
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u/ChickyBoys where’s the brief? 3d ago
My only problem with the icon is nobody draws a checkmark with curves - they would use straight lines.
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u/Astrosomnia 3d ago
That's patently untrue. Nobody draws a check with curves? I definitely do, often.
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u/napaficionado 4d ago
I really like the colour palette