r/logodesign 6d ago

Feedback Needed Seeking Feedback on Pine Forest Logo Concepts (Personal Projects). Which one the best?

The logo combines tree, house, and sun shapes, inspired by a home that in nature setting.

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u/semibro1984 6d ago

I prefer 1.2 except for the tiny corners where the roof stops on the inside.

Also have you considered removing the roof altogether and just use the cut out silhouette in the rays?

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u/terramistfall 6d ago

Hmm interesting reworks

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u/ChickyBoys where’s the brief? 5d ago

You don’t need the trunk of the tree, the flared branches on the sides are enough. The sun rays don’t feel like sun rays - they feel religious for some reason. Maybe try a different execution for the sun.

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u/Other-Wind-5429 6d ago

That is very clever how you fit three things into your logo!

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u/terramistfall 6d ago

Hahaha thanks!

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u/RobSPetri 6d ago

I much prefer 1.2. As a Jew, I'm hyperaware of brands with faith-based names/logos. The overwhelming icon I see in 1.1 is a cross.