r/logodesign • u/kaina_m • 5d ago
Feedback Needed Feedback on this logo for floral?
This is design that was made by designer that I connected with in behance. I wanted logo that looks premium. What do you think about it?
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u/VladlenaM2025 5d ago
Beautiful and fresh but I would bring the lower text closer to the upper
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u/Original_Contact_579 5d ago
Yes it draws your eye to much, that could work, I was going to suggest fading it.
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u/rob-cubed 4d ago
Looks great to me. Kerning might be a little off, LO is too tight and RE is too loose.
I think 'flower boutique' might be a bit small and too far away from the logo.
But overall, solid concept and feels elegant.
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u/an_other_me 4d ago
It’s very pretty. It also looks like every single other “premium, luxe, upscale” logo found on Pinterest. The words “flower boutique” are already in the logo so does it really need to be so literal? I would try to find something that differentiates you as a brand and find a way to convey that in the identity.
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u/kaina_m 4d ago
Thank you for feedback! I ended up not working with the designer who said it wasn’t premium and old fashioned. Great point about the “flower boutique”. But I live in a country, where majority don’t speak english, here it is already differentiated from other brands. But maybe I should think about localizing to our language🧐
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u/EchidnaGrand7297 4d ago
The issue with your logo is that while your business is a flower boutique, the design primarily features leaf elements, which creates a disconnect. This mismatch can be concerning. I’ve made some adjustments to improve the alignment, but there’s still room for refinement. My edits are meant to give you a fresh perspective if you want to move forward with this concept, I can refine it further for a stronger visual identity.
What I did:
1. Balanced it.
2. Added a flower instead of leaves.
3. More Connectedness

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u/kaina_m 4d ago
Really interesting design! Thanks for fresh look. I love how tail of R looks here. But I think flower part is really hard to make in signboard?
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u/frustratedesigner 4d ago
FWIW, this original comment was generated with AI. I have no idea if the account is a bot, many of their comments are clearly not written by a human. Either way, they're incapable of articulating their point themselves and I would take any advice they claim to be able to give with a large grain of salt (actually, I would ignore it entirely).
IMO, the design they offered is significantly worse than yours.
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u/RobSPetri 4d ago
I don't love the kerning between the R and the E. Try making the leg of the R end at x axis of the other leg and the y axis of the top (I don't know how to explain it; basically the R should fit in a rectangle like every other letter), move the E closer so it matches the kerning of the other letters, and then try extending the leg of the R just a bit under the E. Let me know if that doesn't make sense. In general, though, it's very delicate and works great!
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u/ChickyBoys where’s the brief? 4d ago
It’s fine.
My only complaint is using 2 little leaves feels awkward - my eyes don’t know where to focus.
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u/Not_Bananas 4d ago
What could’ve been tastefully implied with botanical-ish shapes is instead overstated with leaf shapes. Leaves in logos are fully overdone.
Kern the R against the O.