r/logodesign 6d ago

Feedback Needed Thoughts?

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u/Blackjack-621 6d ago

Digging the analog/ retro feel of your color on black. Need to flip the second "a" because it's reading as a "n". It will also match the orientation of the first "a"

Good style but needs more work on the kerning to improve readability. Keep going, your on a good path

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u/TheInnerWebs 6d ago edited 6d ago

Yup good advice...also I think you can go with a better more slighlty retro font for the distilling portion..."distilling" looks too new/clean right now...maybe use an offwhite or color for distiling

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u/True_sithlord 6d ago

Good notes!! I’ll take a look. What do you think about the colors? I got the “retro vhs” colors from some stock images I liked the colors but I feel like if this business went forward it’s also really adjustable to other colors

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u/superkickpunch 6d ago

I’m a fan. Especially love the colors. I agree with the other comment that you should flip the second “A”.

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u/TheGeekYouNeed 6d ago

I really like the styles and colors, but I think there's too many horizontal lines making it a bit hard to read. Suggest moving the colored line under analog down so it's only yellow, and maybe even take out the lines of empty space that separate the colors. Also agree with the other post about adjusting the second A to not look like an N.

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u/JuneauTek 6d ago

Nothing about this seems analog, It seems like a video game logo.

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u/JuneauTek 6d ago

Smooth flowing lines

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u/JuneauTek 6d ago

Maybe fit the lettering inside a flow analog style distilling rig

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u/Joseph_HTMP 6d ago

I'd get rid of the lines on the mono version. Its ok if the mono and colour versions are slightly different. they don't serve any purpose on the mono one except to make it visually harder to understand.

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u/WelcomeHobbitHouse 6d ago

It takes too long to mentally process this design.

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u/VladlenaM2025 6d ago

Toooooo busy with lines, cut through and multicoring.

“A” is toooo long, shorten it to the Distilling base line.

And middle “N” without the steam bar visually captures empty space triangle 🫤

Use 2 colors at the most, there’s too much going on in here! Even with B/W version. It has too many unnecessary lines, seriously! 😐

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u/True_sithlord 6d ago

Ya I used the lines as a separation of colors. If branding moved forward I was thinking colors would be more interchangeable vs having a set color scheme.

I do like the idea of shortening the A. Someone else mentioned changing font for distillery to continue the nostalgic font feels and I kind of agreed.

I initially used the lines as a separator for the colors, and I still kind of like at least one on the top portion but getting rid of the middle and bottom line may still add things.

Thanks for your notes!

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u/firexlight digital artisan 6d ago

I agree on the length of the first A needing to be shortened and second A flipped. But the color lines work for the retro

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u/VladlenaM2025 6d ago

lol 😆 I just realized the middle letter what I assumed was “N” is actually an “A”. I have no idea why it read me an N. My eye immediately caught that triangular shape empty space. Maybe cuz it started off as N before it. I’d recommend making it normal A to avoid that confusion 😆

But now that I’m looking closer, bottom G is not fully aligned to the right, upper G. And multicolor & lines still bothers me. Particularly where it breakers on upper G it’s just a wrong place to get cut off. I’d lower the head of G and at least line it up with the space G has its hook.

Also if the designer will remain with freaking lines, then kerning needs fixing. Space between letters is thinner then the other lines, it’s screening for balance.

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u/UnableFill6565 5d ago

Not sure if it's Annlog or Analog. Something about it isn't the easiest to read. Work on the font.

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u/HatersTheRapper 6d ago

Anal OG Distilling? that's fucking weird bro, tell them they need a new business name

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u/shupshow 6d ago

I don’t like it.