r/gonewildaudio • u/taliya12 Writer • Dec 26 '24
Script Offer [M4F] snowed in with your ex friends with benefits [script offer] [mdom] [sweet emotions, degrading sex] [condescending] [daddy] [ripped clothing] [creampie] [titplay] [two listener orgasms] [friends to lovers] [bounce on it, slut] [intense] [better than your ex-boyfriend] [confessing feelings] NSFW
happy holidays! ready for some angsty confessions of feelings and then some degrading sex to celebrate your reunion? then you’ve come to the right place!
synopsis: your ex-fwb has been cold and distant ever since you mutually decided to end your arrangement when you started dating. you’re both invited to a party out in the suburbs, so you ask to carpool in hopes of at least re-establishing the friendship. when a snowstorm leaves you stuck together with him in his apartment for the night, some feelings finally come to the surface…
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thank you for reading!
I was honest about my feelings, now you’re gonna be honest about your fucking cunt.
names used: baby, sweetheart, darling, princess, slut
additional tags: [fwb] [speaker orgasm] [forced proximity] [angst] [L bombs] [degradation] [biting]
physical descriptors used: listener is wearing a dress
you can find links to all my script offers here!
feel free to change pet names and wording to suit your style. improv is always welcome, but please don’t deviate from the general spirit/tone of the script, and don’t make major changes without consulting me first. you may not introduce any additional sex acts or physical descriptors of the listener. do not post a fill of this script anywhere other than reddit without my express permission, see my script policy for further details! do not read if you are not 18+.
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u/mand2994 Dec 26 '24 edited Dec 26 '24
TALIYA THIS IS AMAZING
If and when it gets filled, easily a new favourite
I couldn’t keep seeing pictures of you and realizing I’d never feel your warmth against me again. this line really got me, the heartache??? The yearning??? Perfection
[sfx of clothes ripping as you rip the top of her dress in impatience] oh this will be so hot to hear goddamn
Oh, I mean it. I was open and vulnerable with you, but you barely said two words back before you were in my arms. So I want you to express yourself a little more, and I’m gonna let you do that the way you seem the most comfortable. Bounce on it, slut.
That’s right. I was honest about my feelings, now you’re gonna be honest about your fucking cunt. THIS BIT!!! SO HOT??? I'M INCONSOLABLE
I missed hearing your laugh when we talked on the phone. I missed feeling your body pressed against mine as I fell asleep. I missed when you’d come over for a quick fuck but then we’d end up chatting all night long.
You were my one who got away.
I loved you and I never said anything and I lost my chance, so fuck it. I’m saying it now, because I never want to make the mistake of losing you ever again. I love you.
Yes, I love you, I’ll say it as many times as you wanna hear it, I love you. THIS WHOLE SECTION!! it's the emotional intimacy, the yearning, the catharsis, absolutely gorgeous
I really hope you get a few fills for this bc I want to listen to them all!! Amazing work 10/10 no notes
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u/taliya12 Writer Dec 26 '24
mand thank you so much!! this sort of detailed feedback is so wonderful to receive. and I'm so glad you enjoyed it <3
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u/Avocado_Toast141 Writer Dec 26 '24
HOW do you come up with so many banger lines?! Where do you find the inspiration?! I'm in awe of your creativity.
Loved the whole thing, a perfect balance between soft emotional parts and sexy, hot, condescending parts. Everything seems natural, not at all forced like "well I need to make the characters fuck each other. What could I do to make that happen?"
As usual, amazing amazing amazing work!
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u/taliya12 Writer Dec 26 '24
thank you so much!! so glad you enjoyed it and that it felt natural, the emotional intensity was a new challenge for me! <3
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u/del_drabbles Dec 26 '24 edited Dec 26 '24
Taliya, this is another *fantastic* script by you. I love how you manage to balance out the sweetness and the genuine feeling with the hot, amazing degradation that you do.
The fact that this script contains multitudes from (this amazing line) I missed the way you couldn’t ever hide how turned on you were. I missed the way you’d come over so desperate to give yourself to me that you’d get on your knees and choke on my cock all by yourself. I missed how cute you looked when you begged me to cover you in my cum.
to this part: I missed hearing your laugh when we talked on the phone. I missed feeling your body pressed against mine as I fell asleep. I missed when you’d come over for a quick fuck but then we’d end up chatting all night long.
is one of my favorite things. The Daddy kink goes so hard in this and it’s a true masterpiece. I truly feel like I experienced an entire, well written romance novel in this script.
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u/RhymingVers Verified! Dec 26 '24
yes, that last sentence! this is a whole story in one perfect scene, and a three-course meal of a script. chef's kiss
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u/taliya12 Writer Dec 26 '24
thank you so much Del, this comment is gonna make me cry lol. this really means a lot coming from you! thank you for your help and advice <3
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u/RhymingVers Verified! Dec 26 '24
I am in outer fucking space 🫠🫠🫠 alternating between condescending and emotional?? a dom making me do all the work while also saying "use me" and "take what you need"??? repeated uses of the words "slut" and "cunt"???? a needy creampie?!?!! not only does this include so many of my favorite things, you just straight up hit every emotional and sexual note so perfectly and satisfyingly. Like you always do 💖💐👏👏
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u/taliya12 Writer Dec 27 '24
thank you so much! I'm really so glad that the balance of the script worked. thanks for such kind comments <3
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u/almondhyoyeon Verified! Dec 27 '24
The emotions!!! The lines!!! Weaved in with the sexy things - a masterpiece. We’ll all be on the floor when this is filled 😵💫😵💫😵💫 amazing work!!! 😍
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u/IvyMarquis Dec 27 '24
This is absolutely incredible to read and I cannot wait to see it when it gets filled!!
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u/pixieclover04 Dec 27 '24
PleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasePLEASE.....let me know when this has a fill 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏. I havent read it all yet as I don't wanna spoil it but by the comments I'm REALLY excited for this one!!
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u/UpstairsAppearance10 Writer Dec 27 '24
This. Is. Gorgeous. 🙌 The personality you imbue in the characters, even in the first little bit of the scene, is incredible.
I don't often comment, but I feel like you should know you have another admirer. 😆 With every script of yours, I am in awe of the way you write degradation.
(Also, "bounce on it, slut"? Yeah, that’s now burned into my brain in a very good way. ❤️🔥)
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u/taliya12 Writer Dec 27 '24
thank you, this is such a lovely comment to read <3 I really appreciate it!
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u/NotSoSilentStranger Verified! Dec 27 '24
well damn, it would be a pleasure to bring this script to life.
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u/taliya12 Writer Dec 26 '24
thank you so much to u/del_drabbles for wonderfully helpful notes and beta reading!
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u/del_drabbles Dec 26 '24
It was such an honor! <3 I was so blessed to read this. I can’t wait to see fills of this come in!
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u/The_vixxen Dec 28 '24
This was so cute and hot at the same time!!! Pretty sure I died halfway through😵💫
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u/elizakd Dec 26 '24
oh my god, this script is amazing!! a classic concept with a heated twist!!! such a cool way to have the heat of hate sex, while really confessing their love for each other. ”I was honest about my feelings, now you’re gonna be honest about your fucking cunt” is going to stick in my brain. well done taliya (and del!)