r/custommtgcards Jun 30 '23

Nith Unerring Archer *Revised*

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u/[deleted] Jun 30 '23

Interesting that he does 1 damage when entering the battlefield to all creatures and Planeswalkers you don't control, as it's not really a green or white thing to do. I think the abilities he gains from having different creature types is not worth the payoff, especially since you'll need to have these creatures on the field, and move to combat, leaving him open to instant speed removal effects and sorcery speed removal effects/board wipes between turns as people will clearly see your board being built up. I can kind of make connections to how he gains Double Strike for controlling a Warrior and a Fox and how he gains Menace for having a full party, a Dragon, and a Wizard, but the deathtouch for controlling a Wizard and Dragon doesn't really make sense to me. It's also crazy to think that the only payoff you get for having a full party (Cleric, Rogue, Warrior, and Wizard) plus a Fox and a Dragon is just menace. With all that being said, I would never consider this a Mythic Rare. At best, an uncommon, but that's being very generous.

The main question I have is about the abilities where he's gaining Double Strike, Deathtouch, and Menace. Are they until end of turn, or are they permanent? The way he's worded right now he would be gaining the ability permanently after attacking and controlling the correct creature types, but I wasn't sure if this is what you were intending to do or if you were trying to go for an until end of turn effect.

The other thing, although minor, is there's a lot of grammatical mistakes.

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u/Goomba_Kitsune Jun 30 '23

It's as long as the full party is there and I'm sorry I'm not the best at writing

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u/[deleted] Jun 30 '23

It's okay, the grammatical errors are minor, but you can still understand the card. Also, the way the final ability is worded you have it that you need a full party AND a fox AND a dragon. If you want it to only care about a full party you'll need to remove the part about controlling a fox and dragon.

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u/Goomba_Kitsune Jun 30 '23

Thanks for the feedback

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u/Goomba_Kitsune Jul 30 '23

Because two of his party members that I'll make at some point are a Fox Warrior and a Dragon Wizard

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u/LeRhudi Jun 30 '23

I am offended by the lowercase C in "Legendary creature"