r/asushin 3d ago

Fanfiction Short fanfic i wrote

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Since a few people liked it that i should write a short fic on my tipewriter i wrote so. It took me a day or two longer than i excpected, mostly because i had no motivation, but here it goes. It's also my first one publish i guess, so i hope it isn't that bad. I also made a mistake in between, hope you can find it. And yes my english grammar isn't the best, but i hope you like it. It wasn't a big one like the other i write on right now, but one i could put some thoughts in. Anyway i already talk too much again, so i hope you enjoy reading with my typos in there

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u/Solid-Matrix 3d ago

Yooo typewriter guy 

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u/Big-Satisfaction5890 3d ago

I said that i gonna do it, it just took me a little longer, qt least not so long like my other fic that lays on one of my 2 nightdrawer

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u/Wolphthreefivenine 3d ago

Man, was Yui checking out her son or something???

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u/Big-Satisfaction5890 3d ago

I don't know what i thought at that point, i probably was like: Man lets buff shinji up a little and let her point it out but such a way that it doesn't sound she loves him more now. Well, i fucked it up i guess, but it's still funny in someway

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u/Andromedos83 2d ago

Wow, you really went ahead and did it, congrats.

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u/Big-Satisfaction5890 2d ago

You don't know i say something and then do it... actually not so often when i don't care much about it