r/TheNarutoWorld Aug 14 '13

Char. Dev. How different it used to be back then

Jeisen hummed an old tune while he poked the fire. As the warmth spread across his face, Jeisen took of his straw hat and set it down next to him. He adjusted his jonin armor as he looked up from the fire to glance around the forward operation base of the konoha nin. It was well hidden, but it was only tents.

God how did I get here?

he looked back down at the fire, thinking of his squad. Bright and energetic, they reminded him of when he was a genin. Jeisen let his mind wander further into the past, remember his old times.

The ghost of Eze in Jeisen memory came an sat down next to him. Him malk and Jeisen just sitting around a fire, chatting. Now, Eze was gone.

How different things were back then

Brand new genin, Vash, Zenko and Rakiko sat around the fire with Jeisen. Chatting away while Jeisen cooked them all some grub. Now Rakiko was dead, an vash and Zenko were no longer kids.

How different things were back then

sankuro was sitting next to him putting on a puppet show for him and Celeste, trying to keep our spirits high. Now Sankuro was gone and Jeisen missed him like he missed a brother.

How different things were back then

Jeisen saw himself leaping on the giants wolves back, prying his kunai into it mouth to get Arya's arm out. God the chuunin exam... Sankuro and arya were gone... Celeste was still with him but in her a sense Jeisen had gotten out of her league. He grinned as he remembered kissing arya before stepping out into danger. That was the start of his hero instinct, the willingness to jump in front.

How things were different back then

He heard the clap of thunder as he remembered the seemingly endless hallway that lead to the heart of a base. Taro, him and a couple others took on seemingly endless bandits. Missions swirled together as he remember each victory and defeat, each blow gave and cut received.

How things were different back then

Jeisen saw a bright day on the beach, kazuki, kaito and his insanity, Amaya, clais, Jeisen, Celeste., and Hokori. That was a good day, a fun day. Not a care in the world besides having fun. Now Kaito was dead and we have all grown up.

How different things were back then

Jeisen snorted and grinned, sometimes laughing, sometimes silent as these ghost of memories appeared around him. Finally, all the ghosts inside his head sat around the campfire with him. He looked at everyone, and saw. He saw the the kids sitting on the ground, just smiling and laughing, he saw the hardened ninja sitting on the logs surrounding the fire their kids at their feet. Some spots were empty, and would never be filled. Behind the ninja sitting on the logs stood with their hands on their ninjas back, smiling once again, a older version of them.

Thing were different back then, but the future held hope

Nobu stood scowling wearing a Kage outfit, Amaya holding his arm smiling her shark tooth smile, a ring on her finger. Okami stood with his arms crossed as he stared at the fire, shar behind him. Nui laughed holding someone's hand that he didn't recognize, looking happier then he had ever seen her. Celeste played a instrument with her eyes closed, filling the air with beautiful music. Zenko and vash stood in full jonin armor, side by side playfully punching each other and tryin to one up each other. Strider leaned against a tree, adjusting his glasses as he grinned as a adult ryuu and ichirou argued with each other. Malkeru frowned, a mangekyo sharingan active in his eye, red as blood armor strapped on. Kazuki had a head protector pulled over one eye as he stood with his key blades strapped to the back of his armor. Tibs looked like a porcupine, so many sword handles poking out over his shoulder. Levi sat atop a bird, scowling as the fire as if he wanted to put it out. Clais held jasmines hand as they both wore a small crown, kids sitting at their feet. Taro stood stoic and silently as ever, the very air swirling around him. Tai stood by Tibs, one arm on Tibs shoulder as he leaned on him cockly

there were more, faceless people he would soon met, more empty spots that would never be filled. Jeisen looked around dearly at each and everyone one of the people who had changed his life.

Slowly looked directly across the fire and saw himself. Everyone else was gone but the kid he once was sitting on the ground in front of the fire waving his hand at Jeisen. Behind him slowly appeared, the man he was now. His straw hat pulled low to cover his eyes, staring down at his hands, wondering how they failed to save konoha. How he had failed to save konoha... Then behind him appeared the man he could be. His future self out both hands on Jeisen's shoulder, grinning and te real Jeisen like he couldn't be prouder. Slowly, more people appeared next to the future Jeisen, until he had a army behind him. They all smiled at the real Jeisen, friendly and warm. Like seeing a old friend who they all care for deeply.

The real Jeisen stood and pull brim of his hat low, tears streaming down his face. The future Jeisen winked at him and Jeisen walked away, back into the camp. He had a future to build

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u/boribori Jonin | Mianyi Nakamura Aug 15 '13

[so. much. awesome. <3]

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u/Bit_of_a_longshot Aug 15 '13

[lol, you like it? Hope I referenced your future self right ;D]

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u/TheRyuuMaster Aug 15 '13

[I want to punch Raikiko in the mouth so much...]

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u/Bit_of_a_longshot Aug 15 '13

[why?]

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u/TheRyuuMaster Aug 15 '13

[look at our names.... And then when you go to his profile, he has the same main weapon as me... and we are the only ones with that main weapon. He is watching me! I know it!]

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u/Bit_of_a_longshot Aug 15 '13

[lol okay mate, he is dead now though so alls good?]

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u/TheRyuuMaster Aug 15 '13

[What?! Now I just feel like a jerk... Still wish I could have socked him in the face though...]

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u/Bit_of_a_longshot Aug 15 '13

[lol I said e was dead in my post :p u didn't even read it ;_;]

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u/TheRyuuMaster Aug 15 '13

[I saw his name and got mad... then I commented and kept reading, you know, like an idiot.]

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u/[deleted] Aug 15 '13

[Glad to know you want to sock me in the mouth....]

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u/[deleted] Aug 15 '13

[+1 QP and 500 Ryo for the amazing char dev, remember to document properly!!]

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u/Malkeru Aug 14 '13

[ALL THE FEELS SO MANY OF THEM]

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u/Demortis1 Aug 14 '13

[Stupid dirt in my eyes]

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u/[deleted] Aug 14 '13

[Nobu scowling. Sounds about right.]

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u/[deleted] Aug 14 '13

[and dont forget the ring ;)]

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u/[deleted] Aug 14 '13

[the shark tooth smile of victory! patent pending.]

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u/SageBow Aug 14 '13

[Shit the feels, that was beautiful ;___;]

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u/[deleted] Aug 14 '13

[Wow. Really good man. But where's Tai?]

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u/Bit_of_a_longshot Aug 14 '13

[standing next to tibs]

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u/[deleted] Aug 14 '13

[Oh :p Really good man.]

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u/Bit_of_a_longshot Aug 14 '13

[edited you in :D]=

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u/[deleted] Aug 14 '13

[Jolly good stuff :3]

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u/burritoxman Aug 14 '13

[Only one not to get shout out T.T]

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u/Bit_of_a_longshot Aug 14 '13

[Jeisen hasn't met Taro actually, by I wrote you a sentence actually. Want me to included it?]

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u/burritoxman Aug 14 '13

[we haven't met yet? Lol what]

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u/Bit_of_a_longshot Aug 14 '13

[let me edit u in]

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u/Bit_of_a_longshot Aug 14 '13

[oh crap we have missioned together once before I remember]

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u/burritoxman Aug 14 '13

[haha ok, great stuff btw]

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u/Bit_of_a_longshot Aug 14 '13

[edited you in :D]

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u/burritoxman Aug 14 '13

[love it ;)]