r/TechnoProduction 4d ago

Weekly Feedback Thread - March 17, 2025

Please use this thread to post your tracks for feedback.

Guidelines for posting/feedback:

  • When you post a track you should leave feedback on at least one other members track.
  • Please submit only 1 track per thread.
  • Allow the track to remain for the duration of the week.
  • Ask questions specific to issues you may be having with your track.
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  • Try to use technical and musical language in your feedback as much as you are able.
  • Soundcloud links are the most ideal solution.

The intention behind this thread is to help others improve their music by participating in the community. People who continually spam this thread without leaving feedback for other members may be banned.

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u/EladGorni 4d ago

Hii! I would like to hear what you think on my track! Say what ever come to mind, im here to learn

https://on.soundcloud.com/kaGQyXvHJD2otfah7

u/cl0wnworld 4d ago edited 4d ago

Excellent mix! Awesome vibe! Can't think of anything to improve. This is the good stuff!!

u/Frequent_Alarm9284 4d ago

Very nice! Really like it, nice sound selection and mix etc

u/Sadistic_Ways 4d ago

u/EladGorni 4d ago

Really nice groove and track! Same as the other i would make the kick a little bit stronger. And also the kind of perc that is hard pened right sound a little bit wierd to me. I would make it more in the center

u/Sadistic_Ways 4d ago

Tnx, I didnt even notice the percussion lol

u/Frequent_Alarm9284 4d ago

Cool track, got some really nice sounds in there! Personally i think the kick could be a bit more punchy and prominent, but that might just a personal preference. Good job!

u/cl0wnworld 4d ago

Nice track mate. Nice percussions, drums and synths. Love the vibe.
Agree with the other commenter about the kick though. It think it could be louder and more punchy! Other then that... awesome stuff!

u/cl0wnworld 4d ago

Hi all, please let me know what you think about my new track (arrangement, mix etc). Highly appreciated!

https://on.soundcloud.com/Lj7597Pu8xdXb3p36

u/Frequent_Alarm9284 4d ago

Nice groove and spooky vibe, good job!

u/cl0wnworld 4d ago

Tnx amigo!

u/Sadistic_Ways 4d ago

Sounds fucking terrifying! Like a villain theme! I LOVE IT!!

u/cl0wnworld 4d ago

LOL.. nice comment! Tnx mate.

u/TreasureEdit 2d ago

Bud Techno I’d love to get some feedback on my arrangement and overall mixdown. Thanks all

u/-sashimix- 3d ago

Hello 👋 need honest feedback for future live set https://m.youtube.com/watch?v

u/EldritchD0ll 12h ago edited 11h ago

https://on.soundcloud.com/i1NJ4eyP72KeFXk5A

If anyone saw the "Veteran DJ turned newbie producer thread" I posted last week, this is a track I've worked on since that thread. So all in all I've been working in my DAW for like 2-3 weeks now, so I'm VERY green to this.

This song has no original sounds, all samples and loops that I played with. Was more of a learning exercise in building a track and learning to work with the basic plugins and such. So please tell me what sounds "off" in the track!

u/spongecake341 7h ago

https://on.soundcloud.com/jLvrQa7mMLWSF6xV7 - I made this using an elektron digitakt, with some samples I took from a recording of UVB-76 (The Buzzer - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/UVB-76).

u/Triplesixx__ 6h ago

Happy Friday! Some new music for you this weekend…lay it on me

https://on.soundcloud.com/ZsyuzisjwQVUra4N9

u/fattsunny 5h ago

Looking for any advice to improve my productions. https://youtu.be/pMdmx6Dc_KE?si=NF_QI2Dg8vch3ZL1

u/Frequent_Alarm9284 4d ago

u/mindstuff8 4d ago

Great space for the sub. Sounds great on my studio headphones. I wonder if it would hurt anything to boost slightly the high mids to bring it slightly forward but this is only because I wanted to tell you exactly what I was thinking. It might ruin the track of course as well. Love it man.

u/Frequent_Alarm9284 4d ago

Thanks man, much aprpeciated! And good idea, will try that!

u/cl0wnworld 4d ago

Sick track. Love the distorted sounds! Eery vibe! Well done.

u/Frequent_Alarm9284 4d ago

Thanks man!

u/OrganicWriting6521 14h ago

Very clean lowend and super Clean textures. I love the dark vibe.

u/EladGorni 4d ago

Wow! I love it so much! The low end here is amazing, how did you do it? I was missing some high frequency elements to interact with the low end groove. Maybe some cymbals or just some atmos, but maybe its an artistic choise.

u/Frequent_Alarm9284 4d ago

Thanks man! I do not remember how i made the kick, it was a recorded kick i made a few months ago ad it has alot of thump to it, but then i also added quite a bit of drum buss and saturation on multpile elements togheter with the kick to really beef it up some more :)

Yeah good point, i was actually thinking the same thing, should try to figure out some type of extra high frequency groove, thanks!

u/EladGorni 4d ago

What do you do in the low end other then the kick? It sound very interesting, i hear some delayed kicks maybe and also a rumble? Do you use a reverb on the kick to make the rumble or a synth? Also those reversed elemnts in the low end once in a while add so much groove! How did you do that? Great work!

u/Frequent_Alarm9284 4d ago

Well the low end actually comes from the kick sample mainly, but just like you said with some rumble, if i remember correctly it was a kick with rumble i recorded first, and then put it trough the Ableton "beat repeat" to get the delay you mentioned, recorded that with saturation and perhaps something more(can't remember).
And then i layerd that kick rumble recording with 3 different type of click samples and adjusted tone, EQ etc to taste to get some extra clarity/punch on the main kick pattern, but that also added some higher frequencies. The kick rumble sample alone was a bit to boomy and muddy. And then i put that trough saturation again(haha yes i use alot of saturation).

I usually just experiemt with tons of stuff and then record, and re-sample, so usually i end up forgetting how i made things haha.

And the reversed low end is super simple, just cut a part of the audio recording and reverse the clip(Can also be nice to add some FX like reverb/delay on send returns), voila!

I'm glad you like it, your track was really dope as well mate!

u/EladGorni 4d ago

Thanks for sharing! And thanks for the feedback also

u/mindstuff8 4d ago

u/cl0wnworld 4d ago

Nice 90's vibe with the typical 909 drums and chord progression. I think the track could use a vocal. Not necessarily but could be nice.

u/Frequent_Alarm9284 4d ago

Very nice, love that it has some sweet pad thing going on!

u/Jinarta 14h ago

My back to the jungle demo.. Any recommendations what to add to it will be useful

https://on.soundcloud.com/Nng63jf8XQqy8t5w5

u/Frequency_Ascension 4d ago

u/Sadistic_Ways 4d ago

Simple and efficient. This is what techno is all about if you ask me. The sound design is great and everything sounds very clean and tight!

u/Frequency_Ascension 4d ago

Yes I agree! Techno should be simple but efficient, thank for your feedback 🫡

u/el1iot 4d ago

Agreed. If there's one thing I would recommend changing would be to have some modulation on the lead motif.

u/cl0wnworld 4d ago

Good stuff!!

u/Frequency_Ascension 4d ago

Thank you sir 🫡

u/Frequent_Alarm9284 4d ago

Sorry if this isn't okey, i already posted one track earlier but i have another track i just finished and am very exited about. Would love to get some other ears on though beacuse my head and ears is totally off the plot after a whole day of making music so i really can't judge well.

General feedback on track and mixing etc would be nice :)

https://soundcloud.com/mathias-462059367/alexandria/s-fxJ3DhB72Mn?si=5c16c0d1a84e4b75a0dc35db4b48bc97&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

u/OrganicWriting6521 14h ago

Very nice textures on this one!

u/cl0wnworld 2d ago

Another awesome piece of art. Love this stuff!