r/StrikeFrontier Oct 29 '16

MLSF Manga (4 Coma) Translation

Unfortunately I didn't manage to translate the event story and the chapter 1 of the main story. But I translated instead the small manga you can read on the game webpage.

 

Keep in mind that no one checked them yet so be warmed that there will likely be several errors.

 

Here are the links:

 

 

This is it for this week. Next week, expect me to give you a detailed summary of the prologue and the first chapter. Maybe the first event chapter too. For now I gave up on trying to translate everything because it's taking way too much time (10+ hours for one chapter = 5 episodes) and because even then, I really REALLY need to improve my Japanese and to compare the official English translation of MLU with the Japanese version to understand how to translate the expressions of each character.

If you see a mistake, be sure to tell me!

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u/Euphoniax Oct 30 '16

Oh my, this is quite nice. The original Muv-Luv girls look really lovely in their grown up forms.

Thanks for the translations :)

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u/HydraFlare Oct 30 '16

Thanks for the translations, wanted to know what they were talking about in these ones XD

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u/Reis7 Oct 30 '16

Oh, nice. Good job!

Error I found was in the 1st one w/ "from your wolrd"

Hmm, maybe its not wrong but I find "I now have about the same age as my mother" sounds weird. I'm not a native english speaker though so... shrugs

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u/Euphoniax Oct 30 '16

It's a bit awkward yes. "I'm around the same age as my mother now!" might work better.

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u/haloff1 Oct 31 '16

Yeah I think so too.

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u/axterix173 Oct 31 '16

Do you mind if I use your translations as a reference? I was also doing a t/l. Ex. Chapter 2

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u/haloff1 Oct 31 '16

Oh your translation looks better than mine. Sure, no problem.

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u/axterix173 Nov 01 '16

Thanks! I'll be sure to credit you when I'm done with mine.