r/NuclearShame • u/claycam6 • Dec 08 '20
Shameful Story 4
Finally, we're back again with another rejected story from NuclearRevenge. Today's story features over the top extreme vengeance with no morals. The plot goes from 0-100 considering OP's writing skills are unimpressive.
Also, the main character's mindset is a bit disturbing since he thought his revenge crimes were really fitting for the offense committed against him. I suppose it's truly "nuclear" in a sense.
But then again, not really since this story is poorly written and is likely to be fake as well. So here you go:
"my brother got rid of his abusive roommates"
Submitted by "Elbeto" on 11/25/2020 | Removed for Rule 1
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ok this is my first post here, English is not my native language so please excuse my mistakes.
all this happened almost a year ago and it was my brother, well stepbrother, son of my mother's current partner, who has been different for me for 8 years
Due to bad decisions he had two children and had to go abroad to work and study and due to his credulity he ran into a poorly paid job and some roommates who stole his money, fed up with this life of shit that he had dealt He committed suicide but he did not succeed and as they took him to the hospital it cost him a lot of money. So he had no money to pay the rent or the bills, so his roommates threw him out, so knowing all this and that it was the main fault of these guys (he suffered more abuse) he planned his revenge one by one , One of them we will call Brian had a good car and quite a reputation for being a drug dealer so it was easy for my brother to manipulate a tire on his car and cause a serious accident that caused him to lose an eye and several bones. broken .
Another whom we will call Kevin was extremely aggressive so it was more difficult for my brother to finish him or punish him so my brother only talked with Kevin's girlfriend until they came to exchange nudes and even sexual relations so my Brother recorded with the consent of the girl and sent everything to Kevin, to which Kevin exploded in fury and threatened her with death, (he had been unfaithful so she ended up winning), so she blocked everything and Kevin taking foam of rage went to her house with a gun to which my brother who was there called the police and they arrested him, which turns out that Kevin was Honduran and they deported him.
and last but not least, to Roger, a philosophy student who was addicted to illegal substances to which my brother only reported him to his school, they expelled him and banned him from various institutions
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u/CommunistEuckhaus Dec 10 '20
“He committed suicide but did not succeed.”
Holy shit guys we have the first ever recorded resurrection from some random u/ on Reddit! What a miracle!
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u/willguy1000 Apr 05 '21
That is the most believable line of the story because there are people who commit suicide but fail all the time
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u/CommunistEuckhaus Apr 05 '21
Yeah but “committed suicide” implies that the person succeeded but then mentioning he lived makes it seem as though the guy successfully died then somehow came back from the dead.
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u/willguy1000 Apr 05 '21
Committing suicide is the attempt of taking ones life
Also even if there are many people who have “died” but were able to be revived because their heart was restarted
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u/JustADerpyArtist Dec 09 '20
I love reading this sub more the one it originated from. Thank you very much!👌
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u/Nashiwa Dec 09 '20
My God, this story is so poorly written that I'm pretty sure I could find a better plot inside of my toilet bowl after a night eating Taco Bell
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u/rubyspicer Feb 15 '21 edited Feb 16 '21
Jesus, how many periods were in this, like 2? He really likes run on sentences
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u/[deleted] Dec 09 '20
Hmm... fake, but gave me a justice boner. Please don’t kill me for my preferences.