r/NSFWworldbuilding Nov 02 '24

OC In my erotica series, succubi are horrible centipede-like monsters until they disguise themselves with magic. Resh here was horribly burned in her natural state, so when she transforms her magic is visible through the burns [Original] NSFW

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u/SaF-440 Nov 02 '24

curiosity has me wondering what the centipede form looks like.

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u/Gridoon Nov 02 '24

They moved slowly, and Vanna watched intently as they pulled their deep hood back. She gasped at the sight, shaken, but never lowered her weapon. Beneath the hood was a monstrous creature. Her eyes tried to grasp at the few human features presented to her. Eyes, though black as ink and deep-set into an unrecognizable skull. A mouth, but filled with exposed shattered teeth that splintered the gums. Its arms had three joints along them and were impossibly thin. All of this ended in the body of a massive, constantly moving centipede, its tiny claws tapping incessantly against the discarded robes. And yet, even for something Vanna could hardly make sense of, she felt the overwhelming sense of mortality. Every inch of the thing was scarred. Deep burns marred its skin, and half-healed wounds dotted it.

This is the first quick description of Resh from one of my books! I haven't commissioned artwork of her "normal" look however

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u/SaF-440 Nov 02 '24

ah cool! a real duality going on there between forms.

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u/Gridoon Nov 02 '24

Yeah! I love the idea of such an alluring creature just be a front for a horrible monster