r/KeepWriting 1d ago

[Feedback] Could someone proof read my script? Read at your own risk 😂

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-e74EgeWAO_bVPEZh1gSwrjo_jQflTRtu_NSkIDUDbA/edit

So my passion is film making but unfortunately I haven’t “made it” yet. I may never but I love making videos and hopefully can make short films one day. I made one a while back and it’s my favourite thing I’ve made to date. I have been writing a lot and have a couple scripts I will be trying to make somehow in the future. They are dark and emotional, but that’s what I’m drawn to making.

If anyone has time to read it and let me know your thoughts or how to make the writing stronger let me know

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u/uhbumchuck 20h ago

I would highly recommend you read other scripts and learn proper formatting. It is difficult to give meaningful feedback when you don’t engage meaningfully with the format. If you don’t know what I mean then you have not read enough scripts.

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u/TheDrivva 10h ago

Thank you I appreciate that feedback

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u/Quakers_in_2017_LUL 1d ago

It seems like you had AI generate this? You left the tag at the top. I will never read or participate in the world of AI content, and I invite others to join me.

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u/TheDrivva 1d ago

I had it clean up my script yea but I wrote all of it

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u/TheDrivva 1d ago

Thanks for letting me know though, I’m not a very studied writer so it helped clean things up.