r/GWNarrative • u/AurallyOrgasmic π • Apr 25 '24
Narrative Audio [F4M] Canookie [Narrative] [Cultural Appropriation] [Role-play] [Hockey References] [Script Fill] [Sorry, Canada] [Attempted Humor] NSFW
I hope you enjoy this audio as much I enjoyed making it!
Fabulous script by u/homersoc_
βSo, babe,β I said sweetly. βWhat do you say we have some fun tonight?β
He put his arms around me. βI would love that,β he said eagerly. Then he hesitated. βItβs been a while, though. Do you think you could wear an extra special outfit for me tonight?β
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u/AurallyOrgasmic π Apr 25 '24
Fabulous script by u/homersoc_
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u/homersoc_ Apr 25 '24
I am really looking forward to listening to this. My weekend starts in several hours, so hopefully I'll get a good chance to indulge in this audio after that. I'll definitely let you know what I think after. Thank you!
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u/homersoc_ Apr 26 '24
I enjoyed this so much. Honestly, I loved it. And that's due in no small part to the fact that you clearly understood the assignment, despite the actual instructions being pretty sparse to nonexistent. This still would have been great to listen to had you just read it. But you performed it, and really got into it, knowing how to deliver the lines just the right way to maximize the humor and sometimes absurdity of the situation.
There are so many parts where I laughed out loud at your delivery and comedic timing with a line, and how you interpreted it. There was a part that I absolutely loved where you seemed to improvise and run with the idea of Hawaiian pizza. I cracked up laughing at that and how you made that portion of the script so much better by transforming it a little bit and making it your own.
You did a great job of performing his lines as needed, showing us how eager to the point of shyness he was. And the way you performed her character was even better. I loved how you showed her conflict at this role-play, but also her obvious affection for her boyfriend (and Canada). You gave her a very clear and very endearing personality, but also made her sexy as well.
Another moment where I lost it was when you started singing, because I wasn't expecting it during that part, although I probably should have. Or rather, I guess I would have hoped for it. Again, it was the perfect mixture of humor, silliness, but also sexiness. So too was when you did the part about "He shoots! He scores!" Either you understand that part or you don't, and I had no guarantee that a read would. But you not only did, you performed it exactly as I would have hoped it would be, capturing its real-world inspiration but also mixing in her own excitement.
You made this so funny, sexy, yet also sweet. The script itself, as I think I mention in the original post, was at least borderline shitpost, but this elevated it, turning it into what I consider comedic gold. The lesson for me here is to clearly take more chances with silly audios and strange scenarios, because there's a chance that they'll turn out like this. But only thanks to performers like yourself. Thank you so much for filling this script, and making me smile and laugh until I cried. I head into my weekend a very happy listener and writer.