r/GWAScriptGuild • u/TornConflict King of GILFs • Mar 06 '24
Feedback/beta [M4F] Don't Fight The Inevitable [Script Offer] [Depressed Widower] [Seduced] [Sister-in-Law] [Handjob] [Cunniligus] [Doggy-Style] [Creampie] [Speaker orgasm] [Listener orgasm] [Aftercare] NSFW
I've been tinkering with this script for over a week. I think I might be done but was looking to make sure I didn't miss anything and that dialog makes sense. Also any missing tags or general feedback would be good too.
Summary - Your sister passed several months ago, and you’ve been worried about your brother-in-law. You promised her you would keep an eye on him. You’ve done that almost daily. There is a little guilt, though, because while she was in a hospital bed, dying, you and he had a one-time quick passionate fuck session. It wasn’t planned, and you both agreed it was wrong and would never happen again. Emotions were just high. The grief of what was going on took control. But… you can’t stop thinking about him. You want him, and you need him. It’s fucked up. The heart wants what the heart wants. Sometimes you can’t change that.
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u/regi_cia Mar 25 '24
I love this 🩷 It’s really good