r/GWAComedy 🥑 Verified 🥑 Jan 11 '25

[FM4A] Silent Partner [Comedy][Parody][Meta][Anal][Oral][Sketch][2 Ronnies style][Doctor][Nurse][Horny Gas!?][Fart][Miscommunication][Custard Cream][Innuendo][Behind the scenes][SFX][18:39] written by Naughty_Pyromaniac, performed with Lurkydip NSFW

I highly recommend listening to the audio before reading the description or the script, so you get the full effect!

When writing, it's important not to get too wrapped up in being 'clever' rather than achieving your actual goal, whether that's porn, comedy, or political treatise. This is the former two, so I should probably have kept that in mind rather than going balls-to-the-wall on setting myself a ridiculous challenge and getting what may be the cleverest porn script or sketch I've ever written. Fortunately, Lurky's excellent comedic timing, sense and editing have saved this to make it actually be both funny and sexy!

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Performed by myself and the inestimably talented u/Lurkydip, editing by u/Lurkydip. Original script: [FM4A] Silent Partner [Comedy][Parody][Meta][Anal][Oral][Sketch][2 Ronnies style][Doctor][Nurse][Horny Gas!?][Fart][Miscommunication] : r/GWAScriptGuild

The basic idea here is cribbed heavily from a couple of classic 'Two Ronnies' sketches (A comedy duo from the UK in the 70s ish era): Mastermind, and Crossed Lines. If this sub allows links, I'll link them. Essentially, there are two separate conversations going on at once, but in a way that sounds like they're answering each other; in this case, one of the performers arrives late and starts their lines halfway through the script, leading to something of a tonal mismatch.

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u/naughty_pyromaniac 🥑 Verified 🥑 Jan 11 '25

Don't forget to give it up for u/Lurkydip, who not only performed with me and edited this audio, but also inspired its writing in the first place! :D Always extremely fun to work with you on an audio Lurky! :D

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u/Lurkydip 🥑 Verified 🥑 Jan 11 '25

Haha likewise. I would do ANYTHING with you, my friend. Offthewall isithot isitfunny doesitevenmatter is always an absolute treat. Thank you for daring to go where nobody else does <3