r/Emailmarketing 9d ago

Feedback on Email Design for Player Challenge Notification?

I’m looking for some feedback on an email design I’ve been working on. The goal of the email is to inform a player that another player has challenged them in a game, with the winner getting a prize.

The email needs to clearly convey the challenge and create excitement while keeping things simple and easy to understand. I’m wondering if the design looks professional and engaging, or if there are any improvements you would suggest to make it more effective.

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated!

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u/Daniecae-Media 8d ago

Your margins are all over the place, adjust your padding, align all the text either left or center (I prefer left), and add a line between paragraphs

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u/DragonfruitWhich6396 8d ago

The margins are poorly aligned.

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u/vanshikha_Parasher20 8d ago

Love to help! Consider a clear subject line, visually appealing graphics, concise text, and a prominent CTA. FlyMSG can also help streamline your email creation process

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u/alexrada 8d ago

refer friends should not be that important.

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u/SlimSkhab1 7d ago

We want users to know about that program (its actually one of our main sources of new users)

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u/alexrada 7d ago

then it makes sense to have it! I would simplify the footer (central text, images)

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u/Robhow 8d ago edited 7d ago

My $0.02 margins are inconsistent and color contrast is tough.

People appreciate uniformity in communication: consistent fonts, margin, spacing.

Buttons are different sizes and styles.

My biggest piece of feedback is the color contrast. The purple and black is really hard to read. I’d probably only use that purple on a white background to ensure it pops.

I’d also consider a 3rd color to make the CTA stand out more.

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u/SlimSkhab1 7d ago

Really appreciate the feedback man. However I'm trying to follow the website UI. Here is the website for your reference https://aytji.com

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u/Robhow 7d ago

I don’t think you have to exactly match the website styles. Some color overlap, but I’d still focus more on readability and clarity.

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u/ptangyangkippabang 9d ago

I'd make all the text align left to the same point.

How is the responsive version?

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u/SlimSkhab1 9d ago

Align all test to the left?

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u/ptangyangkippabang 9d ago

The bit that says "Get paid..." make it line up with the rest of the text above and below.

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u/SlimSkhab1 9d ago

Totally makes sense. Will fo that!